Very telling write. I see so many things that you write that are the types of things that most people 'want' to say, but are afraid to say or, worse yet, afraid to admit to themselves. Glad to read you again my friend. -- Jeff
it is good to see your work again, my friend.
This is splendidly done...great composition of quatrain and couplet...great subject...a perfect example of quality of work I have become used to from your pen.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
My thoughts exactly :-) and I bet your having fun too!
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
ditto!!!
Indeed Belle he's out there..
yes, YOUR Twin Flame..no one ELSE will suffice,for no one else can hold your/his frequency.
Blessings..
PS..Call to him..send out a soul-call then just let go and let God..
You go, Girl! :)) The Paragon or nothing... I like! Finely sketched with all the flesh on the bones... now to find the flesh to match the image! Beautifully determined in its longing. He shall appear in response, I'm sure. LOL K xx
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
This would be the perfect man.... Oh does any such men exisit on this planet.:) Wonderful job with this one has many truths and wisdom too.
Peace,
Josie
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
Beautiful write...Hugsssssssssss
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
Darn, counts me out, I just wanted a ****** don't know if we really exist the way you write, but we sure can fool yer..lolol
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
A beautiful write full of passion...
Outstanding...
Michael
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
From the heart and well said.
That is what every woman wants.
Too many settle for so little and definitely less.
I'd love a man like that, too, Labelle! Very well done write; you sound like you could hold your own! And I believe you could! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
i’ll have such a woman someday
or i’ll have no woman at all..
I can relate to your excellent
write very well.
At this time I have the woman
I can never touch
who will never hold and kiss me again
who will not move heaven and earth
to enfold me in her arms and make love to me..
I guess we just fell out of love..
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I Kid on the comments but I must admit I do like your new style of writing it has a deeper reach and speaks more to what may lie hidden
Love Tinka
Carole~
This is splendidly done...great composition of quatrain and couplet...great subject...a perfect example of quality of work I have become used to from your pen.
Indeed Belle he's out there..
yes, YOUR Twin Flame..no one ELSE will suffice,for no one else can hold your/his frequency.
Blessings..
PS..Call to him..send out a soul-call then just let go and let God..
Vesna:)
Peace,
Josie
Outstanding...
Michael
That is what every woman wants.
Too many settle for so little and definitely less.
Your work will resonate with many.
Elizabeth
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
or i’ll have no woman at all..
I can relate to your excellent
write very well.
At this time I have the woman
I can never touch
who will never hold and kiss me again
who will not move heaven and earth
to enfold me in her arms and make love to me..
I guess we just fell out of love..
Peace,
Bill
You're not picky; you're just smart and KNOW what you want. An excellent write.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rusty