It’s only been a few months
since words of passion passed between them.
But it seems like a long eternity of pain;
and now he writes to her of memories
and how just the thought of “Love”
conjures up her touch upon his skin
and the taste of her lips on his tongue.
He speaks to her of intensity
and how it split open the universe
when she was his.....not so long ago;
when the free flow of love and ink
possessed him, left him spent with expression.
Of how her scent became a part of his
mingled together for eternity.
Her warm moisture on his face,
her melon-sweet taste on his tongue,
his trillions of life kisses deep inside her.
Then he closes with, “Be Bad”
and so she shall.... she knows she shall.
She was not created for chastity.
But she wonders if, with any other man,
she'll be as bad as she could’ve been....with him.
Preoccupation kills it all...
That's all I can cynically say bout em.
Terrific write Belle
Hugs..Ch'erie
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Being bad does have it moments as you have shown within this write.
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2007
La belle, lol, as I absorbed the emotions of this poem, the image as a whole, TRULY, took my breath away!! truly. you are stunning, and I Thank you for adding a link to my bio on your Masterpiece, a, SOUL WHISPERED, ENCHANTINGLY BEAUTIFUL work of the heart, you reflect the art of poetry as only the ~Poetess of the Heart can surrnender, feelings of pure loving bliss, as I feel blessed by you, humbled by your wonderful heart. love you and God bless my friend, mike
Sure to bring out the Scarlett in the most self-contained of "ladies", Belle! :)) Such a shame that often ideas only come with hindsight and retrospect... You can always hope that paths will recross and that the intervening time will have kindled mutual passions afresh. You are so gifted at expressing complex personal emotions with such a lightness of touch that it is totally heart-melting and soul-stirring. You ALWAYS discern and read what lies between the layers of the heart and mind, the lines... and the sheets! :)) Nobody, but nobody does it better than you, Darlin. Reminds me of the Bryan Adams song: "If you wanna be bad then you better be good..." Bless you, Kate xx
My Beautiful Sissy! He held paradise within his hands and like a fool, let it slip away, so I will sing no sad songs for him. She is now another man's paradise, when one snoozes they LOSE! I LOVE YOU! Sissy
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The love within each word embraced
the romantic in me and also the
woman who lost love a long time ago.
You are such a gifted writer!
Love,
Katherine
That's all I can cynically say bout em.
Terrific write Belle
Hugs..Ch'erie
Love Tinka
Thanks,
Dan
The picture was so so, teasing, the poem much much better.
Georg
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EXQUISITE!!! I love these "Words of Passion." Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D