She had promised him a dance
way back in 2002 or was it three?
Long before she had arthritis
and he had an artificial hip and knee.
He said he would wait, as long as he must.
With the two of them there was never
any strife, no lies or mistrust.
At the poets’ convention in 2021
when they’d made their marks
and love and life were almost done;
he looks for her, she looks for him.
She wants that promised dance.
Their mutual admiration is more than a whim.
He finally spies her across the room
red hairs now balanced with grays.
His mind slips back to other days
when she would tease him with words
and his would make her sigh.
They would slow dance across the miles
while the rest of the world went by.
Still handsome in his advanced age
She sees him too, distinguished man
Her heart skips a beat at last to meet.
But would he go through with the plan
to meet and enjoy a dance together?
She would have known him anywhere
but she wonders whether
he’ll still want to hold her in his arms.
Since she is a little slow and bent
and has lost all her younger outward charms.
No awkwardness when face to face
memories transport them back
to a earlier time and place.
A thousand lines of shared poetry
come rushing back into their hearts
and in their minds they can see
a debonair man, still agile and straight
and a red haired, curvaceous temptress
who no longer will make him wait
for the feel of her surrendered in his arms
for the reality of all those poetic charms.
A dance of a lifetime, that’s what it is
a fulfillment of a sweet dream
a cherished hope, both hers and his.
And as they slowly move across the floor
suddenly age just doesn’t matter anymore.
They’re young again and full of fire
living out at last their poetic desire.
She gazes into his eyes and whispers.
“You know, I always did love you.”
He replies with a bittersweet smile.
“I know.... I loved you too.”
Beautifully done,I feel this way about someone...And I'm looking forward to that dance...that day...with tears in my eyes...I applaud you...As lovely as ever...Bravo
Though bittersweet you take the reader
there to witness memories and love. I
admire the way in which you've told this
story, Belle. Heartfelt and loving in
every way.
Happy, sad, wanting and yearnings, fantasies and realities touching not only the skin but the most intimated insides but, why it is that one need the self assurance by saying i Always Did Love You?
Georg
Stunning the dance of a life time
What a luck man it's so romantic
To weight since the 2002 for him
To dance with you as he promised!
this is true romance and one
Of the most beautiful love poetry I ever read!!
And may your long awaited dance come true for you!
Love Peace and Happiness to you always...Morning Star
Suddenly you make all of time seem immaterial, La Belle. We are who we are, and no mistake... as Antony said of Cleopatra: "Age shall not wither her nor custom stale her infinite variety". Soul mates and spirit mates are ageless, after all. This would be worth waiting a lifetime for... many lifetimes, in fact. Makes me cry. This is love in all tenses and in all circumstances. Most beautiful, sensitive and tenderly wrought. Bless you, Kate xx
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2007
wow...such a beautiful heartfelt dedication. A lucky man to have such a talented poetess waiting to dance with him after so long. Excellent romantic poetry as always Ms. La Belle-Should that person not make the dance before that time would it be all right if a Dark Knight might have a close encounter with you on the dance floor?? I also love to dance
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2007
LaBelle, this is deeply moving poetry! Poignancy at its best. Lydi**
Geeee stiil dreamimg about my dance since 2002...filled many oceans...with tears..butnot giving up yet....just need to get to that convention in Las Vegas.....and marry him too!!
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there to witness memories and love. I
admire the way in which you've told this
story, Belle. Heartfelt and loving in
every way.
Love,
Katherine
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
You really know how to put the words on paper..
A dance of a life time..
xoxoxo
Reminds me of S & Art g's song, Old Friends...
What a luck man it's so romantic
To weight since the 2002 for him
To dance with you as he promised!
this is true romance and one
Of the most beautiful love poetry I ever read!!
And may your long awaited dance come true for you!
Love Peace and Happiness to you always...Morning Star
You did this one soooooo well sis!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Regis