Excellent write and self-expressive. We don't like pain and this poem is fille with it; it can make us miserable. You're done something about pain by writing a wonderfu expose on missed love.
La Belle Rouge,
Look at it on the positive side, you are writing beautiful poetry because of this loss. He was there for the exact amount of time he was suppose to be there. Tell your soul, that his soul has left the building and he ain't a comin, back!!! I have been in your shoes. It's been two long years of grieving the soul mate that wasn't ready. Soul mates can come and go, we have many, timing the key to successful uniting of souls. The timing was off this time, there will be another chance, perhaps in this lifetime, but more than likely not. Looking forward to your healing words of wisdom...they will be coming because you can only grow and learn from this experience..Peace lovely lady, you deserve much better..
-- A decision delayed even one second is not the same decision --
A fascinating guided journey through your decision making process and cause and effect that will help you to think about your decisions and how your actions or inaction impa
Thanks for sharing this gem,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
Lvoe Tinka
George
Your on a roll...
I'm smiling for you, but I always smile...
when I'm not a pirate, he, he...
Hugs....
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
compelling piece!
Beautiful!!!
Georg
Look at it on the positive side, you are writing beautiful poetry because of this loss. He was there for the exact amount of time he was suppose to be there. Tell your soul, that his soul has left the building and he ain't a comin, back!!! I have been in your shoes. It's been two long years of grieving the soul mate that wasn't ready. Soul mates can come and go, we have many, timing the key to successful uniting of souls. The timing was off this time, there will be another chance, perhaps in this lifetime, but more than likely not. Looking forward to your healing words of wisdom...they will be coming because you can only grow and learn from this experience..Peace lovely lady, you deserve much better..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" Moonstone
Beautifully penned; one feels your words, because they've been there. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Very well done,fine fine write.