it was a thing of wonder,
the seamless joining of our souls
as old as a continuation of eternity
as new, as exciting, as a babe’s first cry
it was a wild ride on a carousel
and a placid meditation of life’s serenity
love and lust, it was...forbidden
but a thing of beauty, a joy forever
it was dreams and imaginations
based on the bedrock of our love
and inability to live without each other
though now we are forced to
i have no regret, no remorse
you have known me as no other has
we were gifted the secrets of hearts
and touched with more than fingers of flesh
i know the you she will never know
for your soul was mine... as mine was yours
she had your flesh, never your soul
and if faced with a choice, i’d take the latter
so fold the grief away now, dry the tears
love this magnificent may visit us
only once in a lifetime, or once forever
My Darling, think now of the love, not the loss
Luv can hurt, indeed, as you so eloquently expressed it in this poem, and as I can avow from experience! But life wouldn't be worth living without it and, even though I've been hurt by it (actually by the loss of it) more than once, I'm willing to take another shot at it because the alternative--loneliness--is a fate worse than death. You're an attractive, talented woman and luv is sure to find you again.
Melie (Mel) Bacon
Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2007
"My Darling, think now of the love, not the loss" La Belle, superb write and the ending line is so true...Hugs, Peggy
May the carnal relation now rise, Scarlet, make a courtly lover blush today...the soul has to arrive before lust...let the Dog Star guide you, La Belle...
Exquisite write from a true romantic methinks. <Mikii>
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
A poignant beauty of a write. Yes, the soul is more important than the body in relationships....for without the soul, the body means little. There is staggering emotional pain in every line here. Lydi**
Oh Sissy! This one hurts me to the very core of my being! I wish for you speedy healing, so the pain of loss will soon fade and give you peace. I LOVE YOU! Sissy SC
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
Awesome as awesome can be...
Have a beautiful day La Belle..
Hugs...
Oh so lush recalls - But a soul has large amounts to rise & fall - Forever is reel - Then earth life we steel - For moments of love carried above -{wonderful} -love <>Ted
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Melie (Mel) Bacon
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Love is like a thread through body, mind and spirit. Yes, think always of the love which has no beginning and no end.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
In Ancient Spirit,
Sage
Have a beautiful day La Belle..
Hugs...