I've Lost You (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 12, 2008

She will find her voice! I feel an utter silence of sadness in these sad wonderful lines!
Great inspiring poem LaBelle!
AS a healing is taking place and the cleansing will follow!
AS the words are written and shared, the little girl becoming most aware...
And... if for a little girl, my sad heart is deeply touched as her answers are found... Growth from all around!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, LIGHT, and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 11, 2008

This is so sad...I hope she isn't lost forever....So eloquently written. Love, Diana.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

As to be the hardest pain too bare
with love
Ron

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 9, 2008

...perhaps the innocent girl...within gone forever...and perhaps one outside is missing also...both are lost...both loves...are lost.
poingant pen...passing pen...journey passing...La Belle.
John

Reviewed by Seed4ever D.

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

It is wonderful that you write these thoughts La Belle, good to release your sadness, heart warming words Seed4ever

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

So true, just have a wonder bra, wonder whereit's gone.... sadly this is very american, and just starting over here... but still if a Brit has his desire that's it.. nowadays it's she who runs away, wanting more trappings....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

This breaks my heart, Belle. I'd simply feel like dying if I lost one of mine. You captured my soul with your verses. I so wish you to feel what I feel in empathy. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Tears. And tears at my heart. I too have watched in helplessness at one of my woman childs... Only a child can bring such desperate pain as is evident here. God bless. Liz

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Wonderfully expressed lament for the loss of ties with a child...yet, perhaps, just perhaps...they are stronger than we want to believe...and one day will be back, holding our hand as we begin to weaken? Hope the best for you and yours, M'Lady,
Jim

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

I can feel the pain and desparation in this write that only a parent can feel. To raise a child to adulthood only to lose them to emotions and feelings is a cruel twist of fate to understand but not always irreversible. Never give up on hope that someday somehow that blood that you share will bring you back on the same road.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

You have grabbed my heart and soul with this one as I now fully well the agony, anguish and utter hopeless emotions. Stay strong....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Nope, more sad than tender . . . Sad to the nth . . .

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

We are incapable of being Wonder Woman, only ourselves, Belle. If we come across individuals who cannot accept us for the caring and compassionate women we are, then we'll never be good enough. True love is being accepted for who you are --- a woman --- and if a man truly loves you, he will love you, as a whole, and not just some shell of a person that he envisions in his head!

Cling to your innocent soul --- that little girl soul --- and you'll be okay, in the end; I know it!

All the best,
Jill

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

More tender than sad, a longing cry for handful of snow melting on the palm of ones hand leaving the cold feeling of absence.
But you didn't lost her, she is inside your search.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Heartwrenching write, Belle; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Touching and poignant, Belle. Very moving.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

So very heartfelt, La Belle, and so very sad.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2008

Oh my,so very sad,have a wonderful day sweet lady..Hugsss