The Last Concubine (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 30, 2016

Wonderful story

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

sweet caring poetic story Belle, touching. It seems this way the older we get, nothing but memories left of days gone by, days of strength in length. hugs

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Excellent writing, excellent story you weave with your words! Pure magic, Belle, pure magic! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

The only right way to die...the only one.

Georg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

With love...honest love...the heart doesn't judge. It is grateful for the rhythm it recognizes.

Blessings and love!
Susan

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

What a story. So well penned. But that is no surprise. But you continue to delight and entertain. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Delicate offering through a wonderfully wise tale so creatiely penned....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

A beautiful offering La Belle!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

What a wonderful story, now I think this one he loved most!!!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Quite an epic tale, La Belle.

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

That�s one well told story -La Belle -you are such a great story teller - bravo to Belle xx

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

As always very lovely sweet lady..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

Beatifully compassionate, La Belle, you weave a tale of love and comfort - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

he took her with his heart and soul.

is there a better way..naaaaaah..
I'd love to be taken heart ans soul..sigh..

Exceptional write..love it!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 25, 2008

he took her with his heart and soul.
Lived and died warm and contented
within the circle of the caring arms
of Abashag his last concubine.
Belle, this very well written story gave me goosebumps as I read it. An excellent job here indeed my friend. A real pleasure to read and a comforting way to pass on to eternity. Have a wonderful day and God bless. :-)