Created For Butterflies (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

...utterly enchanting, La Belle

Carole~

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

amazing and dazing verse my dear poetess, hugs

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

A woman, a butterfly and a summer breeze, stir softly, feel the bouquet, the softness...they are only for you.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

What a beautiful and delicate memory to savor and hold on to....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

LaBelle,
Beautifully sensuous in every way - language, phrasing, choice of imagery, the imagery above all.

John

Reviewed by C. Stone

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Love the opening and ending lines!

"her shoulders were
created for butterflies"

"bowed low like willows
under elephant stampedes"

Beautiful

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

where stark impossibility met
impossible strength head on
and smooth shoulders
created for butterfly dances
bowed low like willows
under elephant stampedes

Sorry I missed this earlier, Belle, because I think
it is one of your best--and that's high praise.

-gene.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Wonderful poem, Belle; fantastic write! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

This totally blows me away, Belle. Such a unique and powerful idea that is all the stronger because of the delicacy and tenderness of insight you have couched the images in. Your choice of musical accompaniment also complements to make this almost like the opener to a kind of thriller-romance movie somehow... Whatever, it sends goose-bumps all up and down my spine! :)) This is, conceptually, one of your very best for me. And so good to see you again, Darlin. You are missed. xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

As warm and tender as a first kiss, or perhaps the soft touch of forever lovers...not of lust...but of tender reaassurance. Very nicely done indeed.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Sweetly Done Belle!
May images come to mind!
Love the metaphors here, such delicate offerings captured lightly!

WRITE ON!
Passionate_Purple_Pulsing, SHEE

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Very well done, La Belle!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Most engaging poetry, Belle. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by David Clure

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Amazing how fitly chosen words can transport us into exotic places, and introduce us to characters we've never met. Very enjoyable poem, La Belle!

~Zach

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

There is a quiet, mystic feel in this poem.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

Soft and inviting read. Very well done.

Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 21, 2009

this is beautiful n its characterization and feel