what can I say to you
to ease the pain you bear
to light your loneliness?
dreams, yes we have
shared a few, memories
engrained in our souls
these things will always
belong to us across miles
and beyond all our todays
if it brings any comfort
I am more than a memory
I’m flesh and blood willing
to nurture and care for you
with an intellect that wants
to challenge yours, perhaps
in ways that bring you joy
I'm more than just yesterday
more than then, back when
love was in word and touch
I'm more than secret retreat
to escape your present pain
I am as real as your heartbeat
as close as your thoughts
as caring as you will allow
for it is the you of today
who still calls to my heart
La Belle, you reach out and explore the relationship between what was, and what is -- emotions and love once great remain -- though the style of intensity and emotion may not appear the same, the passionate heart is ever vigilant -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
IMAGINING THAT 'YESTERDAY' HAS NOT CHANGED 'TODAY'...BUT IT HAS...STILL THE THOUGHTS ARE SWEET AND COMFORTING TO A LONELY HEART. WELL DONE WITH THE GREAT PHRASES AND VIVID IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
V e l v e t. The others are right. Your poetry is not just 'about' love. Love spills from it in big, shimmering, heart-shaped drops. Reflects and is reflected!! More! MORE!! xOx Pea xOx
To care even when it is over, to love even when love is no longer returned, to be there when a friend is needed...that is love of the heart...beautiful.
fee
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2009
Our yesterday's and our today's, sometimes we manage to mishandle both of them to the extent we must try to justify our sorrow in unusual ways. To know where your own hear is and trying to explain that to someone else who may be confused is sometimes a difficult, nay impossible task. I liked this.
Is that Meryl Streep? LOVE HER! and at 58yr. She's Got Spunk!
Then, so do you Belle!
This poem feels like a written page
pulled out of a Southern "good" Book ~
Such sweet sentiments from a loving most-guided heart!
Romance beckons! and La Belle heard it once again...
Hundreds of excerpts from the archives of the Narcissistic Abuse Study List regarding Pathological Narcissism, relationships with abusive narcissists, and the Narcissistic Personality Disorder (NPD).
There's great depth and true stillnes in this fine poem.
John
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Carole~
Thanks for sharing your talent
Hope you have a wonderful day
The Buzzard
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Cheers,
Dan
fee
Then, so do you Belle!
This poem feels like a written page
pulled out of a Southern "good" Book ~
Such sweet sentiments from a loving most-guided heart!
Romance beckons! and La Belle heard it once again...
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs,
The Colonel
Savannah, 1863