Your poem is perfectly balanced in more ways than one. It is wonderful when passionate love expressed over a long period of working together becomes mutual admiration.
I simply adore it. And so do you, by this beautiful piece.
AHHH...AND HIS PRESENCE IS 'ALWAYS' MORE THAN ENOUGH. I CAN RELATE BECAUSE TRUE LOVE...IS! AND I WILL KEEP THIS ONE TOO, POETESS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
An interesting attempt to bring an interaction between substance and form. I also have attempted something similar but haven't posted them on authorsden. Perhaps I will soon. This was very done La Belle Rouge, as always. John
Belle, love has no ceiling or depth limitations or expiration time. It is the essence of understanding and commitment. No challenges can overpower what the heart is willing to endure for the object of its affection. Love has the patience of absolute conviction. You reveal all those qualities in this poem, a treasure of romance. May love and peace be always with you my very dear friend. Jon Michael
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I simply adore it. And so do you, by this beautiful piece.
Ron
La Belle. This is another gem for safe keeping.
Love ya!
Jane
with no fear, only more love.
Always,
Deborah
Unique nuance in every verse.
Lovely poetry.
Lady Mary Ann