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BRANDY AND EDGAR
by Bill Grimes Jr. → (All Poetry by Bill Grimes Jr.)
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A song about the deadly White Horse....


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Edgar said “I’m lonely”
Brandy said “me too”
“I think I’ve lost my vision”
“And I don’t know what to do”
 
Life on coffee
Cigarettes
Bleary mornings
No regrets
 
Dopamine shuffle
Liquor slurred
Fried synapse
Wounded bird
 
His missing rib
Such brittle wings
Her sultry smile
Gold nose ring
 
He needed her
Just wanted her to know
The chance slipped through his fingers
Sleepless nights ago
 
“He’s the only one for me”
Precedes her painful pause
Searching for forever
Overlook the flaws
 
Glazed disposition
Crown of matted hair
Tender soul a rotting
Dazed
Stark despair
 
Mean streets
Dark
So f***ing cold
Minutes seem like hours
Teenage eyes grow old
 
Jungle steeped in evil
Consciousness evades
“Survival but a choice”
Says the Queen of Spades
 
Thirst to feel
Not merely see
No time left for sad goodbyes
He wandered aimlessly
 
Reckless Altar Boy
Lacerated prey
White Horse overdose
He tried too hard that day
 
 
 
© Bill Grimes Jr. 2008
 

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 Reviews of "BRANDY AND EDGAR"
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
This left me "still" thinking about the jungle we live in every day. A nice write.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Nice to see you back! Excellent writing and fully expressed, a cement jungle filled with traps and only the wise shall overcome....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
...well written words...of one given chance...and fallen beneath a horse of darkness.
excellent work Bill...
John

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
Well, This is wonderful ..love it..I have missed you..I hope you are doing Ok..stay safe and well OK..Hugss,much love to you

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 9, 2008
I may have missed some of the nuance, Bill, but I
really like your poem and the rhythm in the way you
write: The chance slipped through his fingers
Sleepless nights ago.
- gene.


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