Let me forge a blazing new path through the clouds Let me climb the stepped leader of a lightning bolt Let me slide down a slippery rainbow slide Let me ride a thunderhorse (I'd like a fast colt)
Let me play a game among the northern lights Let me sing to an audience of stars in the sky Let me introduce myself to the planets Let me kiss the man in the moon as I pass by
Let me dance on the peaks of a mountain range Let me soar with the eagle at unheard of heights Let me have visions of wonder in my head Let me have something to hope for every night
...and now for Review #17: what a gorgeous poem, with such an awesome message! The picture suits the poem so well; beautiful write and photo~! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I have no "let me's" to add as I have achieved the best, I am able to read your poetry, it gets better with each and every write, this was quite the special one, Karla...Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Glorious write Karla! I felt like
I was with you all the way;-)!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
Beautiful write!
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
I'm thinking of that song, "Dream The Impossible Dream". Don't know why, but yer absolutely correct--Nothing is impossible. Positive thinking will get you EVERYWHERE. Lovely poem.
very inspired, postive poem! the imagery is written from a very heightened perspective ...
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2004
Karla, that last line is the illusive, always talked about key to life's mysteries...hope... something to look forward to. I think it's the reason we sleep between sunset and the dawn... every single day is new and full of hope. What a magnificent, grandly positive piece you've written! This is an anthem for hope and the future and for never giving up. Wonderful stuff, dear heart! katy xox.
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
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So upliting, yes this is awesome.
...and now for Review #17: what a gorgeous poem, with such an awesome message! The picture suits the poem so well; beautiful write and photo~! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Love Tinka
God Bless
Michelle
I was with you all the way;-)!
Thank you
Robin
Allen
Reindeer
You are soaring like a bird in Literature K
Peter Paton
PS Have you been hanging out with Eileen again?!