Ed Matlack's review of "Not That Different After All" inspired this write. Thank you, dear (((friend))).
There once was a little boy, Whose illness robbed him of happiness and joy, Doctor's visits, pills his lot, Along with x-rays, surgeries, many shots,
But the illness stayed the same, How he hated this disease that left him maimed, He'd dream of the ocean's roar, "They" said he couldn't enjoy it any more,
O, the tears, how'd they begin, He'd sit in his wheelchair, watch the tide come in, How he wanted to get wet, But that would only make everyone upset,
One day, with sobs in his heart, He felt his dreams and hopes were coming apart, 'I don't like living this way, It hurts not being able to run or play,'
Someone heard his sad, sad prayer, An angel in paramedic's guise did care, He went to that little guy, 'What's your name? I'm Ed, dry your tears, please don't cry,'
'I want to play in the waves, To be normal again, that is what I crave,' Ed had tears on his face when heard that plea, 'C'mon, boy, let's meet the sea,'
The little boy lived his dreams, He split the air with laughter, childish screams, Thanks to Ed, an angel sent, Who remembered the boy behind the patient.
Karla you make the heavens open and tears of joy wash over the boy and his angel, making the water pure for him to play in!
Beautiful caring heart you have, sweet one!
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
This is wonderful, so touching, and such an important point made at the end.
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Karla, this is such a loving and compassionate expression! ...Outstanding write, Dear Poet! Thanks for sharing this!
Cynthia
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Oh, Karla... this kind of eloquence can only come from a truly generous and caring heart. What a touching poem... from a truly beautiful soul. katy xox.
This poem made me cry; what a beautiful, heartfelt, compassionate write! And thank you for thinking of Ed; he is such a good guy, and you, my dear, are a fine example of a compassionate, caring human being! I am honored to be your twin; thank you for all our years together! It's been fun!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *APPLAUSE*
Sure Karla, nothing like making me cry in the memory of this...of late have been thinking of going back to get my EMT and start to work on a ambulance again, just it was a happier time, even with situations like your poem herein emphasized...thank you for including me in your work, I am truly HONORED! Peace dear friend, Ed & Rufuz
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
This book consists of a 150 pages of Christian poetry about the end of time and the Second coming of Jesus Christ not as a servant but as a King, the King of kings. To bring righteousness and peace to the earth and restore the government of God! Peac
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Peter Paton
Thanks for sharing.
Reg.
Tears on this side!!
Love Tinka
Beautiful caring heart you have, sweet one!
Cynthia
Best regards,
Leland
This poem made me cry; what a beautiful, heartfelt, compassionate write! And thank you for thinking of Ed; he is such a good guy, and you, my dear, are a fine example of a compassionate, caring human being! I am honored to be your twin; thank you for all our years together! It's been fun!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D *APPLAUSE*