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Looking At The Moon
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I look out of the window,
The harvest moon is full,
Stars whirl in the midnight sky,
The temperature is cool,

I look out of the window,
At the moon on display,
I have everything I need,
Troubles are far away,

I look out of the window,
The moon looks back at me,
I have been blessed, that I know,
Why am I so lucky?

I look out of the window,
Do others see the moon?
Or has their moon been hidden
By hatred, war and gloom?

I look out of the window,
Thank God for the moon's light,
I now know what I must do,
Pray extra-hard tonight.

(C) Copy written, October 6, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Looking At The Moon"
Reviewed on December 17, 2008
Karla~!

Great image . . . your work is incredible!!


LOve & Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
This is excellent Karla your words never cease to amaze me...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 8, 2004
this ia a wonderful inspirational poem
and i thank i'm going to follow your advice

thanks for sharing

Reviewed on October 8, 2004
Wonderful poem, Karla. Anytime I look at the moon I feel happy and refreshed. All the unpleasant moments I had undergone during the day just fly out of the window.

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Great poem, Karla! I love the moon too. It was just Huge the other night too!

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Dear Karla,

That captivating moon, certainly seems to have a hold on some. It's mysterious glow, drawing one right into its magnificent beauty and field of magnetism. Stunning write Karla, and beautiful picture.

Warm hugs and love from your friend in Sunny SA
Elga

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
I look out of the window,
Do others see the moon?
Or has their moon been hidden
By hatred, war and gloom?

An extremely captivating write, Karla. When I gaze up at the moon, I
often wonder how many other souls around the world are doing the same, and what they are thinking about.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
The full moon always has me pacing the floor, writing poetry.
I found this little poem gratifying. Thank you, Karla!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Lovely sentiment.

Becca
p.s. Excellent poem too!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 7, 2004
Karla,
Beautiful little poem. I was looking at the moon last evening and wondering how many others in the world were looking at it that very moment. Just a little thought of mine to keep in touch with reality.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Great poem Karla!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Very inspirational and honest poem, coming from a good heart. Isn't the moon beautiful? it deeply belongs to us. Lovely poem. Franz

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I love harvest moons! Good poem!

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Beautiful Karla! This was so lovely, I love looking at the moon, especially the hunter's moon,

Reindeer

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Yep,Pray Extra Hard Tonight For That Mourning You Awaken In Is Looken In Out Your Window,i.e. Coffin!

Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
wonderful, wonderful poem - I often stand on my deck to watch the moon and pray. it makes me feel grateful, too.

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
lovely... nice work

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
You can never pray too much...Ed

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
The moon always casts a spell on us. Gives us views into other times and other lifes. Yep, praying is the best

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Thank you for sharing your inspiration, Karla. This is a lovely poem, one full of grace, and gratitude.


Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
Yes.... we should always pray more harder Karla...
Fine and inspiring write
Love and hugs
Peter

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
"Looking At The Moon" sings wonders of gratitude of a wise heart.

Lovely song can be heard throught the lines of "Looking At The Moon".

Thank You for sharing Your poetic art.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
And say thank you to the God who made it possible. We are all more blessed than we know. Beautiful write Karla. Michelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I love to watch the moon. This is a beautiful poem Karla, and I will think of it and you next time I see the moon. Wonderful work!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
I kinda go all hairy.

Often times I lie on my bed gazing at night, and stare at night sky.

Great right..A full moon noooooooooooooooooooow....

Reviewed on October 6, 2004
"I sees the moon, and the moon sees me...." LOL

Beautiful, heartfelt write about the moon; I always enjoy looking at the moon and wishing at times I could go there, to escape the trouble and strife plaguing our planet...powerful, emotionally-charged write; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 6, 2004
This is lovely
It would be perfect on an inspirational plaque.......I see poems here and there that I think should find a home on one of those things.......
I love your writing Karla!
pax ...A


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