Not my best work, but I had to get it out...forgive the anger and sadness.
A woman in Plano, Texas, has been charged with murder in the death of her 11 month old daughter. She severed the baby's arms and called 9-1-1 to ask them to check the status of her baby. The "mother" was found in her apartment, along with her dying child, covered in blood. The reason? She was depressed.
what could a little baby do to you she just wanted your love you just couldn't give her any of that you owe her an answer to her "why did mommy do what she did" "didn't mommy love me" your daughter was just eleven months old what did she do to you that made you decide that she had to die who died and made you God
do you feel better are you still depressed you severed her arms you watched your little daughter bleed to death then called authorities asking them to see if she was all right what kind of mom are you what makes it worse, you have two other kids thank God, they weren't home if it were up to me i would do to you what you did to her
you deserve nothing less you aren't a mother you're a monster
(C) Copy written, 23 November, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
*Crying*
A monster indeed....
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
I could not believe that either Karla. I have always said if you don't want your child give it to someone that does. Like me that poor baby.
Andrea Yates, Deanna Laney, and now this one, One sits on death row, while another sits in a mental institution, this one now in a county facility, but their children, lay silently in a grave, with their voices hushed by their murderer's plea of illnesses. I knew when Buck Files managed to get Deanna Laney off with an insanity plea, that the children were no longer safe, and never would be again. Are they ill? I mean, really honestly ill? Or, are they simply cold blooded murderers no different than any other throughout history?
Brother will turn against Brother, Mother against child...
God Help Us All.
This is an unjustifiabl act of crime. I can feel and understand your emotions, Karla and my deepest sympathy is with you and people who have such a kind but brave heart to face their anger without fear. Your brother and friend abdinoor
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
We are responsible for our actions. Karma will see the justice that the earthly plaine has forgotten. I understand your anger.
I feel your anger and the pain and sadness in this write. I am horrified and in tears that anyone could do this to a child, let alone her own mother! She is a monster!
Oh sweetness, I saw this on the news. I swear the world has gone crazy, or should I say crazier. That's just downright evil! Hugs to you & Sis! Happy holidays.
it's a solid, gut-wrenching write, Karla, and a tragic situation, a heinous act. i just want to add that serious biochemical imbalances can contribute to such monstrous acts, which in no way excuses them. I am angry, too, at the mother who either killed in cold blood or was so lost within herself she couldn't feel anymore. I am angry that this can happen in our world. Dawn
Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
I pardon your anger as you are entitled to it. I too, heard about this story. Horrifying---no other words.
Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
What a heart wrenching story.
She IS a monster. :(
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2004
What a tear jerking write Karla. The visuals bought home by your write are horrific. How a mother, or anyone could do this is beyond me.
Karla you are brave, and not politically correct! The trouble is that those who are, will tell us that she is a troubled mom who needs help like all the others who kill their children and get away with it. They stay in sheltered homes while your tax dollars pay to keep them there,like the one who drowned her six children.None of them ever have to pay the supreme cost that they made thier children pay. Othrs will say they are paying by having to live with what they did. Baloney they are living and have the chance to get out like many do and go on to a different life. It's the failed criminal system in this country that allows such a travesty of justice! Excellent write Karla!
What could a little baby do to make a mother do this heinous crime to her own flesh and blood? It makes no sense; and I think they ought to cut HER arms off. Let the punishment fit the crime; and she IS a monster! Heartbreaking write; this made me sick when I heard about it! Thanks for informing and educating us! Powerful, gut-wrenching write that is too much in the news today; it's pathetic how our kids are treated nowadays!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears, tears, tears <
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A monster indeed....
Love Tinka
Brother will turn against Brother, Mother against child...
God Help Us All.
Lisa
I feel your anger and the pain and sadness in this write. I am horrified and in tears that anyone could do this to a child, let alone her own mother! She is a monster!
Cynthia
JC xoxoxo
She IS a monster. :(
Believe It Or Not_
Her Ass Will Burn In Holy Hell!
TRASK
God Bless
Michelle~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears, tears, tears <