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Never, Ever Give Up!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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"NEVER, EVER GIVE UP!"
~~~~~~~~~~

trying to smile
despite the loss
of all my hopes
and dreams
~
trying to love
when there is none
rumors of war
and hate
~
trying to fly
with broken wings
that want to hold
me down
~
trying to live
in dying worlds
that seek to kill
me too
~
trying to write
when words won't come
and pens run out
of ink
~
trying to smile
through all the pain
i will make it
i will
~~~~~
(C) Copy written, 5 January, 2005
by Karla Dorman.
 
 


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 Reviews of "Never, Ever Give Up!"
Reviewed on January 7, 2005
Karla,

Truly a very inspirational and uplifting write - Bravo my friend on this outstanding, exceptional poem!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
a lovely write Karla...

Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Karla as always a great write..
God BLess
Michelle~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Karla your writting has gone from great, to blasting into outer space.

Perseverance, and dogged determination. With the lord at the helm..

This is a keeper, beaut..

Love your friend in England..

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Karla, the ink isn't dry, never for you, it may hide a
bit, just to make you look for it;-)You are a first class
trooper, and an example to all! Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Yes you will, because you have True Grit. I truly hope that ink in your poetic pen never dries up either.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
A very poignant poem here Karla one of my favorite porcelain angels has a broken wing.

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Its funny Kar, ya know, at weakest then strongest, although it sure does not feel that way, and there at sorrows point, the heart most receptive to learn, and this, much better than laughter, Al

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Never, never quit, said Mr. Churchill, and was he ever right. Hope things get better for you, and I will keep you in my prayers. It's hard to suffer, but I think it has a reason somewhere, and sometimes, makes us stronger

Reviewed on January 5, 2005
(((Karla)))

I hope you aren't depressed; but I am glad you are writing! As long as you shall write, I shall read; I love what you have to say! Excellent, emotion-filled write; and the picture is too cool! That is one determined frog, and he reminds me of you at times! LOL Great write! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
i'm so sorry to see you down but you are right, you will make it, you have a strong will, it comes thru in everything you write

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
I know you will
just keep on writing
I'll keep on reading
Don't be a hating
just keep on loving
enjoyed your write
excellently penned

William .....Peace


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