"NEVER, EVER GIVE UP!" ~~~~~~~~~~ trying to smile despite the loss of all my hopes and dreams ~ trying to love when there is none rumors of war and hate ~ trying to fly with broken wings that want to hold me down ~ trying to live in dying worlds that seek to kill me too ~ trying to write when words won't come and pens run out of ink ~ trying to smile through all the pain i will make it i will ~~~~~ (C) Copy written, 5 January, 2005 by Karla Dorman.
Karla, the ink isn't dry, never for you, it may hide a
bit, just to make you look for it;-)You are a first class
trooper, and an example to all! Love, Eileen
Yes you will, because you have True Grit. I truly hope that ink in your poetic pen never dries up either.
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
A very poignant poem here Karla one of my favorite porcelain angels has a broken wing.
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Its funny Kar, ya know, at weakest then strongest, although it sure does not feel that way, and there at sorrows point, the heart most receptive to learn, and this, much better than laughter, Al
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2005
Never, never quit, said Mr. Churchill, and was he ever right. Hope things get better for you, and I will keep you in my prayers. It's hard to suffer, but I think it has a reason somewhere, and sometimes, makes us stronger
I hope you aren't depressed; but I am glad you are writing! As long as you shall write, I shall read; I love what you have to say! Excellent, emotion-filled write; and the picture is too cool! That is one determined frog, and he reminds me of you at times! LOL Great write! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
Truly a very inspirational and uplifting write - Bravo my friend on this outstanding, exceptional poem!!
Best wishes,
Robert
God BLess
Michelle~
Perseverance, and dogged determination. With the lord at the helm..
This is a keeper, beaut..
Love your friend in England..
bit, just to make you look for it;-)You are a first class
trooper, and an example to all! Love, Eileen
I hope you aren't depressed; but I am glad you are writing! As long as you shall write, I shall read; I love what you have to say! Excellent, emotion-filled write; and the picture is too cool! That is one determined frog, and he reminds me of you at times! LOL Great write! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)
just keep on writing
I'll keep on reading
Don't be a hating
just keep on loving
enjoyed your write
excellently penned
William .....Peace