Senryu: Cozumel Waters (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on March 14, 2005

Dear Karla,

Short sweet and beauty in both senses :)

warm hugs
Elga your friend in South Africa

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

beautiful, justlike the photo

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

Karla,

Takes one's breath away ... stunning work my friend!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

for sure...it is wonderful nature and all her colors!!!
thank Lady of Light
beautiful write and pic

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

How true. I guess the cruise has made you all beauty conscious, not that you were not so before, but now it glows:):)

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

I agree, Karla; and I'm so glad you got to see it, and were truly inspired by its sheer beauty.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

hehehehe Andy you Nutz!!

Lovely write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 8, 2005

beauty is the eyes of the poetess

love,

john+

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

I just look in the mirror...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

I have friends that took their kids down there a few Xmas's ago, and told me as well of the clear waters...just don't drink the water...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Thank you for this tempting poem. and the picture is beautiful I see beauty but apparantly not tru beauty.
glad you had a good time.
Salute!
Love Tracey xo

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

You are so so lucky
but thats only because you are so so deserving!
I am glad for you............its a memory of a lifetime :)
hard to be back huh?

lol
yrs ago I went backpacking thru Europe, and I used to work in Manhattan. My first day back to work commuting on the subway, I looked around and suddenly realized that I was back.......a few days prior I had been in Paris.......and I looked at the people on the train who were just being themselves....lol....unbathed, rude, odd, sweet, crazy, perverted, insane, sneaky, funny, friendly......but we were packed in like sardines.......and I started to cry! LOL...poor me! Then I walked up the stairs, and my hand hit a big wad of spit...fresh and warm on the banister.......which I cleaned off immediately on getting into my office.......
ahhhh vacations!

lol
welcome back!
Anita

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

There is nothing as beautiful as nature and being at sea really takes my breath away. Nice, Karla! Welcome home.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

More Like Unless You Know It You Cannot Believe What True Beauty Is,i.e. For Love Of (God) Is For Love Of Little Children--COMPASSION!

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

I remember basking in sunsets in the Florida Keys. Now THAT's amazing!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Karla this is a beautiful write, about a beautiful place
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Even prettier than the chic's on the FOX News Network? LOL I can only imagine how beautiful that place is in person.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Karla, I have never had the privilege as a so-called "artist/photographer" to visit this beautiful spot our creator provided for the enjoyment of humans...but I have friends who go there every other year, and I have seen many photos like the one you have above...and heard their "Ohs and Ahs" often.
So glad you could take a break to enjoy this!
I certainly enjoyed your senryku.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

It really is isn't it Karla and thanks for the post.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

hi I'm right behind you;-) wish I were on that beach, lucky you to have seen it and been inspired to write that awesome Ku! Wonderful Kartla!

love,
eileen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

Like Karen said, exceptional ku.
and I'm still jealous. :-D
Nordette

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 7, 2005

(((Karla)))

Exceptional haiku; glad you had fun on your cruise! Well done, Cruisin' Karla! BRAVA! Beautiful picture, that water is inCREDibly blue! WOW!!

So, when is the next one?? And can I come with you? PLEASE???? *whining like a puppy*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D