Liar, Liar (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

..sooo many people have become just that.. liars! Perhaps their souls can't cope with reality as it is sooooo they live in a world of lias..in essence frustrated dreams...
Insightful write Karla..you'r on a roll..wow!!!

Vesna*

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 6, 2005

Powerful words Karla
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 6, 2005

Oh so good! Both the concept and the imagery. And the rhythmic flow is brilliant - difficult to do with short lines. "The practiced lines of metred truth sitting on the tongue as lies". You have this all taped up and in a nutshell. Great write, Karla! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

Great write Karla,
Great pic too!

Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

Oh and how they must practice their craft too. Wonderful poem and terrific sculpture to accompany it. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

Lies that sit on tongues become more active and jump to our ears and burrow in our minds.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

lies reveal the truth of deception ... powerful rant, Karla ...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

Excellent Karla! Very well expressed, felt this down to my toes,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

a nice piece on the evil art of lies...good job here, Lady Buckeye

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Fantastic rant Karla! Love the graphic! Feeling sassy ?;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

nice little rant you have here
but always remember behind each lie there is a small amount of truth
revealing character

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Strong write... the bad part with lies, is always trying to remember them... keeping stories straight

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Write on Karla, truth lies in what set of lies to believe in. Profound poem. Henry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Gepetto say's I'm a real boy. Jiminy keeps making me lie..Honest!!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Typical Of Humanity Like Children Who Never Got There Ways Even My Son Since Day 1 Can Will Lie His Way Out Of Paper Bag....

Excellent...

TRASK

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Very profound and powerful Karla!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

I think most people are basically as honest as the situation requires and all of us have the capability to lie if necessary. I'm not saying it's right only probable. Good write.

Felix

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

A very goodun'- Karla!
(This is a real bad one) We "nose" who lies, and who truths. - Bill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

I was just about to accuse Pinnochio of nose growing lies...!!

But there ar so many of these liars around it's not funny!!

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

Easy enough to solve. Quit reading them.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 4, 2005

(((Karla)))

Excellent word usage; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(