Time to Unload...Unwind...and Dump the Crap (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Dear Karla,

Beautiful, amazing power of thought and a gorgeous write, you keep flying Karla.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Excellent as always
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

(((Karla)))

Love the sassiness of this; the title took me quite by surprise; but what I read was super! Outstanding write yet again; don't let anyone clip your wings! Just soar higher than you have ever soared before! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Two eagles are surprised when I do a fly-by.

I bet they were, Karla - keep flying high, and keep dumping that crap!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

I've said it before. I'll say it again.

"The Eagles they fly high
They shit right in your eye
It's a damn good thing for us
That cow's can't fly"

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

You gotta keep the thermals with yer..

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Sometimes Karla....one just has to let it all go. And you've done a fine job of it.

Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 27, 2005

Adda girl, Karla! But what else would we expect from The Lady of the Lights?! And we always knew you already had wings, right?! Yup, this my childhood dream has yet to come true; I have parascended and was amazed at the stillness that there is just 100 feet above the earth... noise is all at ground level. I'd love to parachute, too, but guess that is more about diving down like a lead weight, rather than soaring up on the thermals. Lovely thoughts and perspective in this one. So, what does the moon look like close up - is he as cheesy as is said about him? :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

I think you are predicting a day when man will fly on his own like an eagle. Well crafted poem with deep meaning and profound insight. Your brother abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Excellent Karla, I too need a vacation, long year!

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

you sure know how to soar ;)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

This is wonderful Karla, I definitely need a vacation!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Fly as high as you can...but hey NO pooping okay....lol!!

Wind carries alot of power and might just land on my head...hehehehe!!

Good to see you feel great!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Just don't dump your crap on me, I got enough on my plate already and boy is it ever delicious...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

fly..fly...fly.....soar to your heart's content!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

i knew you could fly if you tried...go girl

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

I love it how you always find your wings, Karla.