Senryu Chain (5/7/5): Memories Relived (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

let us never forget!! well done, karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <

god bless america again, and let us never forget the horrors of that day!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

that beautiful picture chased a lump into my throat and your words suit the upcoming anniversary perfectly. God bless you, Karla. Dawn

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

And the horror sadly continues. A very powerful piece, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Think how hard it is for those of us who lost that day...ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

You captured that heart wrenching day with vivid imagery....excellent!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

You captured the feelings so vividly I've sat here until I'm numb looking at the pic and remembering...who can ever forget...You do these so well Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Karla,
This is one of the best poems I have ever read.
first because I experienced this first hand and secondly
because You have presented so much here!
Your pain expressed is esqusite and Your loyal feelings of anger
when many of our people are condeming the President is to me
OUTSTANDING....THIS IS EXCELLENT , EXCEPTIONAL AND YOU HAVE DONE
A PHENAMENAL JOB WRITING THIS ....I APPLAUD YOU ...STANDING OVATION!!!!!
BE BLESSED WITH ALL TRUE JOY HEALTHY LONG LIFE AND WONDERFUL GIFTS
OF PEACE AND CREATIVITY IN UNITY WITH ALL THOSE YOU LOVE.
SHINE ON AND ON!!!!
PEACE AND OCEANS OF LOVE!!!! VICTORY BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU.
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

I don't, and I won't forget, but way too many have forgotten the horror that went down that day. Good.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

The picture alone now speaks of hallowed ground. Your revisiting words are like a moment of total recall that lifts the veil on a sacred wound. Andy is so right... I remember walking into my mother's little home, and she was transfixed to her TV screen at 2.00pm... in a small street, in a tiny West Country town, in little ol England 5000 miles away... you talk of a small moment in time, on a small patch of land that changed the face of the whole globe and shrunk the world to the size of a football forever. A beautiful and emotion-packed chain that garners our minds and hearts always. TY LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Whole Idea Not Dwell on Past But To Make Sure No Evil Greed Mongering Politicians Ever Never Makes It Happen Again ,i.e.TO YOU TOO!

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

A day We will never forget!!

Powerful write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

This certainly is a day that has changed the world forever. Great write.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

Lady K,

Powerful memories stirred. I think many of us lost some innocence that day. Well expressed my friend.

Peace and (((Hugs))),

B

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

As soon as i saw the pic my heart sank. Memories most horrid came to mind.
I bet whoever reads this. Does not remember the day before or even after. Yet will remember where they were when seeing this travisty so vile.