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The Working Poor
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I'm right under your nose,
but you choose to ignore,
stepping over me in your haste
to get away, lest my poverty
soil your thousand dollar shoes -

And here I am, in front of you,
but I am a phantom...
a ghostly reminder of what could
happen if the cards turn up,
and I should have stayed hidden
behind the walls of shame -

And so you look away.

Do you think I like living like this,
not knowing where my next meal
will come from, not knowing if I'll
be able to get out when the next
disaster comes, or wondering what
will happen if I get sick and can't work?

In order to live, I have to work; too
bad my paycheck isn't paying me.
It's a struggle to pay the bills; it's
a struggle to keep a roof over my
head or find food to eat; it's a struggle
to find someone who gives a damn.

Mostly, it's a struggle to survive.

It's a battle I am determined to win,
despite the odds stacked against me;
I just wish y'all would understand
that I am not America's dirty little
secret...I am one of the Working Poor.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "The Working Poor"
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Outstanding Karla,...echo Carole'..; Brilliant write!
peace',
Rich Criso

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 14, 2005
Brilliantly stated Karla....

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed on October 14, 2005
(((Karla)))

The world needs to read this; it should be a wake up call as to how the rich are treating those who are not like them. Such a shame, such a g.d. shame!! Powerful, no-holds barred, gutwrenching write; should be required reading of those who don't know what it is like to live from paycheck to paycheck; maybe it'll get them off their fat rich asses and help us who are only trying to pay our bills and forage ahead! Very well done; I salute you, Poetess! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on October 14, 2005
You gave us a real picture of how the working massess feel. This is one side of the survival coin. If we look the other side may be the situation is much worse than this. Great poem, karla.
Your brother Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
if only mankind could learn to look out for one another, poverty would be non-existent ...

powerful poem!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
It's a sad sad..no MAD world out there sis!!

God bless those who are willing to work and provide for themselves!!

Lucky are those who privilege enough to cope!!

Love Tinka

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
Wow, Karla, this is deep and so well written, especially the last two lines. powerful stuff

Reviewed on October 13, 2005
Too many of us, Karla! Too many of us... but how else can they "conquer"?! Just to let you know that you are not alone....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
The working poor. And the poor working.

Yup money goes to money.
A nice man said look at the lilles in the field....So I did and a bee stung me..

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
You are certianly telling it like it si Karla, and it's not just the working either, I spent my whole life working and they put me off on a micical pension that can't even pay my bills.
Sad world out there

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
Karla it has ever been so, wealth keeps its face turned to more wealth,and refuses to look at anything else, lest it has to do something.Excellent poem on the topic, though frustrating for those who are in need.

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 13, 2005
well, Karla, in one short little poem you've managed to make me clap my hands and say "YES!," cry, and inspired me to write something I've felt compelled to write for a long, long time but have been too damn worried about the consequences or perceptions... you knocked it out of the park and straight to the heart with this one. it goes to my library. thanks for finding the courage to write it. Dawn


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