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Mesmerized
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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In response to Nordette Adams' "Nordette's in Love!" write about master juggler Chris Bliss. I came...I saw...and was totally mesmerized.


Poem Artwork

Are we spinning out of control
on elliptical paths of fear
of falling?
Or are we held in the hands of
a Master Juggler who knows what
He's doing?
I don't know - but as long as I
am here, I watch, m e s m e r i z e d, as He holds
my fate in
the palms of His hands, and pray that
He doesn't fling me off into
outer space.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

http//mojo411.writingjunkie.net/2/chrisbliss.html


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 Reviews of "Mesmerized"
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
delightful read and fun write.

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
My fav lines
"Are we spinning out of control
on elliptical paths of fear
of falling?
Or are we held in the hands of
a Master Juggler who knows what
He's doing?"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Enjoyed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
There are days when I think a fling off into space might be a welcomed change, but in all honesty, I love my life here and I am blessed for each day I get to spend surrounded in the amazing beauty of this planet. Chris Bliss is truly amazing. I was captivated by his talent the first time I watched him and everytime since. This is a wonderful poem, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Sherry sent me his video a whiole back and when I first saw him
I was spellbound as you say. You did a grea poem on it Karla! Excellent capture!

Eileen

Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Wonderful write; he was amazing! WOW! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Karla
Sweet and cute for sure
Don't spin out of sight...lols
Peter

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
You have already been flung, Karla, and you landed here with us, thank God...don't know what we would do without you...ed

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
See, can I pick a man or can I pick a MAN! LOL. Loved this write too, Karla. But you forgot your colon, so here's the link again. Thanks, Ms. StormSpinner. http://mojo411.writingjunkie.net/2/chrisbliss.html
~~Nordette!


Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Yeah, but I imagine he could give you a good working over before he flung ya. LOL

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Lol!!! I'm allready there Karla! But I think there's a thread attached to my belly button if I venture too far out. Totally unique. Loved it!

Lin

Reviewed on March 27, 2006
I love this Karla, and tell your sister to check her email the cover design is in, the book will be going to print at any time...
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on March 27, 2006
A cute one,
love, Birgit and Roger


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