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Senryu: Rrrrrrrooooling Blackouts
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rrrrrrrroooolling blackouts in
the middle of a heat wave -
what are they thinkin'?

a temporary
thing, they say, but does it help?
won't the power surge

after the blackout
overburden the system?
it doesn't compute.

supply and demand
is the reason they're giving -
rather confusing.

(it sure ain't helping
the high utility bills -
making us hotttt - tter.)

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Senryu: Rrrrrrrooooling Blackouts"
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
This is a powerful write, very well done
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Electrical and gas: two ever-increasing necessities of life that are putting many people on edge, with no end in sight. Sad. Excellent (not to mention, illuminating *grins*) write; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Rolling blackouts: illusions that only they will understand. We know its wrong.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
So much for the lekky boards forward thinking....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
So happy to say ours are under control for now!!

A stinker for sure!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Seems like you just can't win! Hope all gets better for you!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger (we'll stay in the freezer for an hour before we hug you :-))

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
I think when a company fails to give their client what they bill them for...there should be som compensation afterall...if we girls buy a blouse with th sleeve torn out we want our money back. Poor sevice and unequipped companies should be fined until their customers get what is their vow toward their clients. Being a provider is just that...
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Karla you do such a great job with these! I really feel for you with the heat, it is something I don't look forward to. I hate it when it gets to hundred degrees. I'm praying for you both! Take care!

love,
et

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Yea vacation time is coming can't have things too easy now can we?

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Can't even begin to imagine this predicament, Karla. But a water shortage in Britain in early spring??? Crazy. Margarita had no water, but cheap as dirt rum and a tank full of gas for about one Euro. It's easy to start to realise the real value of money when all one wants is a glass of water or a fresh breath of air... And, sorry, I remain as ever Klueless Kate as to the mind-workings of the human PowersThatBe. Know great senryu when I see them, though!! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Still cool here, fortunately, 60's daytime, and into the low 40s at night...hope you stay cool...phone number will be on way to your email address...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
It is getting that time of the year. Happens every year. As they say s*** happens.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Karla
It seems there is an energy crisis all over the developed world just now !
Keep your thoughts on the Divine !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 18, 2006
Higher Utility Bills and Much Higher Gasoline Prices - Ain't Spring just grand??!!


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