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Evening.
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I don't know *where* this one came from. I hope you like it.


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Evening.  And the sun, tired
after a long hard day,
puts itself to bed, pulling
multi-hued clouds over
its head, ready for the night.

Evening.  And the windows are
open, inviting the
breeze to come in and set a
spell as Mama serves the
pot roast and vegetables.

Evening.  Dinnertime over,
Mama and I go on the
porch, watching lightning bugs pop
out like stars, one by one,
in time to the cricket's rasp.

Evening.  The loveliest part
of the day, when I can
curl up with Mama under
the covers, and take all
night to make her dreams come true .  :)

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Evening."
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
It is very beautiful!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 22, 2006
Beautiful and magical offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on April 22, 2006
It could only come from your heart, and that in itself makes it beautiful.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 22, 2006
Just a lovely magical write Karla. Excellent.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
outstanding! beautiful imagery

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
this is wonderful ... it recaptures the mystery, love and splendor of childhood ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Well you have captured us from morning into evenigh and did it with some of your best prose! Very beautifully imaged Karla! Kudo's!
Wherever it came from, keep it coming;-)!

Love,
eileen

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
woke up to a wonderful poem and now the sun sets in Texas to another

;)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
This is indeed one of your best and totally my favorite of all the works of yours I have read. Your muse was working hard to create this masterpiece of feelings.

Felix

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Add me to the tag-a-longs, for this is the way I was raised... under a different but same, evning sky over in Georgia. Beautiful memories seeping out of your pen, to give us an unforgettable evening. - Bill

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Your poetry of the night sky always is a reason to gout doors and look up. Thanks for the beauty of your pen.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Beautiful write, thanks for sharing this one with us.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Evening does seem to be a magical part of the day for kids, when play has been played and it is getting ready for bed time after supper. Brings back images of my youth.

Reviewed on April 21, 2006
I love it, another great write from your pen
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Karla,

This is so pretty; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Karla
I love this rocking on the porch...:)
Reminded me of summer nights in Georgia !
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
k.j.--

a lovely evocative study nicely done

good write

l&h

j+

Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
Reviewed on April 21, 2006
Karla,

Very relaxing prose. I was drawn into the scene and just wanted to put up my feet and stay a while.

Cynthia


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