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Roses
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Take the time. :)


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The sun cracks open the morn,
spillin' you onto the floor.
What a rude awakening.
Ready or not, it's time to
face the day and get a move
on.  Hurryhurryhurry!
The minutes tick tick TICK by,
passing into history
with every wasted moment.
Too much to do, not enough
time in the day to achieve
nearly impossible goals.
Work yourself into a heart
attack; sign your death warrant
with your workaholic ways.

Now:  sl o  w down.  Breathe.  Take the time
to stop and smell the roses.
The day ain't goin' nowhere;
it's been a constant presence;
you just didn't notice it.
The rising sun isn't your
enemy; it is a friend
to be greeted; hope and new
beginnings are in the dawn.
The peaceful calm of morning
can set the pace for your day.
And the roses - the lovely
roses!  The hell with it; work
can wait until later.  There
are roses.  ROses to be
smelled, roses to be painted.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Roses"
Reviewed on April 28, 2006
Lovely, wonderful advice!
Love, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed on April 27, 2006
This is a beautiful write here, thank you for sharing it, I loved the pic
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
This is wise advice, Karla; unfortunately, in the pace of this world, it is often forgotten. Thank you for the timely reminder. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Dearest friend, time was an invention of mankind... when they had nothing better to do, LOL! Then, the next generations took such invention more and more seriously, to the point of finding themselves controlled by their own "creation" - and losing touch with true time, which is the one of Creation, thus of Roses, among other amazing elements of nature. Thank you for a gentle, wise view of truly valuable time... and with a glorious scent, too! :0)
Many roses and {{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}}} with
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
In other words, stop and smell the . . . Well, hell everybody knows THAT, it is just the matter of accepting the reality which proves so difficult. I know. I fought the smell of roses most of my life, and still, to this day, find myself rushing about in an embarrassing way for the sennior citizen that I have finally grown into. Good work.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Excellent wqrite Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Since most of us love roses, I'm convinced that it is the only flower getting univesal approval. One can enjoy it like a partner; admire flawless beauty from a few feet away, and savor the aroma of that certain Love - up close! Ah, the rose, its quality is indescribable, even after I've tried.

Loooooove your poem! It says it just right... as your plain-out writing does in such a delightful way. - Bill

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 27, 2006
Karla
Like Susan below I believe " Little things mean a lot "...
We should always take our time, to take everything in around our environment...it always pays in the short and long run !
Love and Light
Peter

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Lovely sentiments Karla! Thank you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
So true my young friend and some of us don't learn that valuable lesson till we face death and the end of our rose smelling years. Thanks for the gentle reminder to all.

Felix

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Rene loves roses & I always stop to smell them, as well as any flowers I trip over in my days...ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Awww yes, so true, rush, be rushed for the rest of the day. Take it easy even if late, the rest of the day is unhurried.
Nice one Special K...

Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Excellent write, Karla; there is a powerful lesson in this piece! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
A lovely piece
Well written
Most enjoyable reading

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Details that go to the wayside will be the details that we yearn for in later years. The simple things we take for granted are the greatest gifts God gives to us. Thank you for define the need to stop and smell the roses.
Love,
Susan


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