little dead pieces of me fly off and never have i felt so ! ! A L I V E ! ! as i do after a haircut - lifted weight of the world's been off of my shoulders and the head feels so light -
the feet hardly touch the ground and i f l o a t amongst the clouds in a moment of utter hilarity - you know, i should do this more often.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
LOL I know exactly how this feels........and yes I too often say after a hair cut that I must do this more often :-) Fun write!
THIS is how I feel everytime I hairWASH... perhaps I should do THAT more often??!!! Great picture to lift your words as well. In my current psychological/emotional state, I have decided to grow my short layers for the first time in about 10 years... a sure sign of middle age, trying to recapture what has been lost!! On the other hand, you maintain your youth, girl, and keep chopping away - not like Turner though: scary!! LOL K xx
Karla
It's good to get the weight off your hair and shoulders in this world !
Great fun poem
I heard the East Coast is getting it stormy !
Love and Light
Peter
Glad you are enjoying your new found freedom from all that excess hair. Wonderfully chipper and happy write; very well done, Karla! Love the picture; neat!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
"Little dead pieces of me fly off" ???
You have got to love that! What a great line to start a poem with. I'm getting a haircut on Saturday . . . I'm looking for a similar experience! (-:
Richard
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Regis
Bet you look wonderful!!
never thought of a cut that way, I usually feel sad afterwards
I must have that Samson gene in me.
take care
pax Anita
peace and love, Carole
thanks for sharing this
love and peace
Anything you write you made it so much fun to read. I simply adore this!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
eT
Felix
Susan
God Bless
Michelle!
Love it, Karla!
Sage
It's good to get the weight off your hair and shoulders in this world !
Great fun poem
I heard the East Coast is getting it stormy !
Love and Light
Peter
Paul;-)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You have got to love that! What a great line to start a poem with. I'm getting a haircut on Saturday . . . I'm looking for a similar experience! (-:
Richard
Rebecca
Love, Birgit and Roger