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Haircut
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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little dead pieces of me
fly off
and never have i felt so
! ! A L I V E ! !
as i do after a haircut -
                                              lifted
weight of the world's  been
off of
my shoulders and the head feels
so light -

the feet hardly touch the ground
and i
f l o a t amongst the clouds in a
moment
of utter hilarity -
you know,
i should do this more often.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Haircut"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2006
LOL I know exactly how this feels........and yes I too often say after a hair cut that I must do this more often :-) Fun write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 25, 2006
Damn long haired hippie freaks, should get a haircut and real job...oh sorry I was just reminiscing...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on May 25, 2006
...now, Karla...i've HAIRED it all...and i loved every BIT! Super enjoyable, Sister! love ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 25, 2006
If you've seen my photo, you'll understand why I cannot use this form of therapy. Delightful offering, Karla. Merci. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
LOLOLOLOLOL

Bet you look wonderful!!

never thought of a cut that way, I usually feel sad afterwards
I must have that Samson gene in me.

take care
pax Anita

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
That's nice, means it doesn't take all that much to make you happy.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
Love this delightful poem Karla, but I am in the same mood Kate is...I am growing mine for a new look.
peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
I always hated having a hair but not any more :)
thanks for sharing this
love and peace

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
THIS is how I feel everytime I hairWASH... perhaps I should do THAT more often??!!! Great picture to lift your words as well. In my current psychological/emotional state, I have decided to grow my short layers for the first time in about 10 years... a sure sign of middle age, trying to recapture what has been lost!! On the other hand, you maintain your youth, girl, and keep chopping away - not like Turner though: scary!! LOL K xx

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Hi Karla:

Anything you write you made it so much fun to read. I simply adore this!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Wow! You make me want to get mine cut Karla!;-) Superb whimsical poem! Reaching ever higher levels, Brava!

Love,
eT

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Well I can still remember when I had hair to cut off vaguely lol

Felix

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Nothing like a good haircut, Karla. I know after I get mine cut, it feels like I lost two pounds!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Haircuts can make you light-headed especially if your hair was long before. I like this poem as it makes me reflect back to my last hair cut.
Susan

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
I loved this one, a great write Karla, and I know the feeling well
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
a cute lighthearted look of locks

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Sunday I tried to cut a little off the side, hah I ended up shaving my whole head. Skin head now. Wanna hair cut? Yup it is freeing..

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Delightfully unique and uniquely delightful!
Love it, Karla!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Floating Follicles, Karla!

Sage

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
You go girlfriend..xxx dove

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Karla
It's good to get the weight off your hair and shoulders in this world !
Great fun poem
I heard the East Coast is getting it stormy !
Love and Light
Peter

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
I've just had mine shorn too, although I didn't feel as alive as you obviously do Karla, it is a good feeling all the same, enjoyed.

Paul;-)

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Glad you are enjoying your new found freedom from all that excess hair. Wonderfully chipper and happy write; very well done, Karla! Love the picture; neat!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
"Little dead pieces of me fly off" ???
You have got to love that! What a great line to start a poem with. I'm getting a haircut on Saturday . . . I'm looking for a similar experience! (-:
Richard

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2006
You are so artsy.
Rebecca

Reviewed on May 23, 2006
Sounds like you really enjoy having your hair cut. Amazing what it brings out in you! Wonderful done,
Love, Birgit and Roger


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