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Release
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First rain since May 9th. :) Nearly an inch. Thanks for the prayers.


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the inner child begs
to run between the raindrops -
how can i refuse?

it might be fun to
let all inhibitions go -
might be good for us.

and so, we run out
and celebrate the rainfall -
definately good.

hope it rains again tomorrow!

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.










(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Release"
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
She's dancing in the rain! Lovely thought, hope you'll have more rain, Love and Hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Sounds like fun Karla, delightful write!
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed on June 2, 2006
Karla,

Excellent write, very well done! God is going to take care of us; we just have to learn to trust in Him and go for whatever He has for us down the pike. Very well expressed!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :)

As always, you are in my prayers!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2006
As cheerful as a childs eyes...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Beautifully written and felt. My prayers continue!
Also hope things are looking better on the home
front, and with Dad!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on June 1, 2006
This is a great write here Karla you are in my prayers
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Let the water from the heavens wash away all of your worries and fears...it is so cleansing and healing to walk in the rain...I am glad you indulged yourselves.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
I recall , after a drought, running in rhe rain with my tounge hanging out to catch the beads and giggling and jumping in the puddles and my parents never were angry for we were and are children of nature and God. Beautiful memories relived from your verse. Thank you!
Susan

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
I tried running between the raindrops many times when I was a kid. I thought I'd been successful until my mama pointed out that I was just as soaked as I was walking through it.

She was right, the wet is good!

Now the garden is going to blossom!

Richard

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
had seen enough rain for now....hope you and karla are okay!!

you are in my prayers girl!!


love tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
I see a rainbow there . . . See it? . . . Run, run, to the end, everything is going to be good again . . . I just know it.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Karla
Your prayers have been answered affirmatively again...
I still have you and Karen on the Prayer Boards..
Love and Blessings
Peter

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
As your poem suggest rain can be a rejuvenating experience for sure, as with the flowers, grass and trees it seems to perk us all up at times as well.

FEe

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
This ones cute, Karla. I am praying for you and your sis to find work..Just have FAITH darling..

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
So lovely. Simply and eloquently stated. Michelle

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Rain is renewal and rebirth; a promise of new life, Karla. One can feel your relieve and joy and the gift of the rain. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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