Can You Hear Me? (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

Lots of thought placed within

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 7, 2006

This is a great write here, keep it up and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

I hope he tells you he has a job for you & Karen...we taxpayers are tired already of supporting you, though you do deserve a break...;)Ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

There is a devine message in all of nature, Karla you are so very right. If we wish to learn the lesson we must be very still and quiet and allow the voice to come to us. Very nice poetry.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

ProLly, BOOM, CRASH, BANG, ROAR.....lol

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

He speaks to us in ways of amazing Grace and all we need do is listen.
Susan

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Listen with your heart, Dear Karla, and you will be blessed. You and Karen remain in my prayers.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

This is extremely profound in a spareness of words....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Love the photo and the thoughts!

Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

indeed. Love to you Karla. Mary

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

How positively lovely, Karla!!!
Both the pic and the poem.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Karla
Reminds me of the Thunderclap Newman song " There's Something in the Air "....
Something good is heading your way !
Peter

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Karla . . .
I don't know why, nor do I question what wells up inside my spirit from time to time, here's something for you!

Do you hear me now?
Broken and so alone
In this place I�ve never been
My hands reach out for something
Can you hear me now?
In a desert parched and barren
All the rivers here are dry
Still my heart cries out for you
Do you hear me now?
Head in hands in need of something
In a time I�ve never been
Searching for the mighty river
Can you hear me now?
All the instruments are silent
All the feelings that once spoke
Have moved into a quiet season

Stand strong!
Wisdom is on the way!
Richard

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Wonderful write; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Beautiful picture!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 6, 2006

Very exciting,perhaps a great message is on the way! Wonderful work!

Love,
et