I Was Lied To! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 13, 2007

You should have won in my opinion, this is a great piece, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on April 12, 2007

At least 19 people would have voted for you! See, that's not so bad! Ha!...Even without fluff! Ha :)

Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

I'm dumbfounded that this didn't win, Karla! It's wonderful and I think you aced it.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

Great jobo Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Come hell or high water, I would have voted for you Karla.
Rusty

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Oh poo!! Didn't win?????? In my Little Pink Book, this is a sure-fire winner, Karla... clever and wry with enough realism to make it too close for comfort... in other words, spot on! Very well done... Have a Kate Silver Kup with bows on! :)) LOL xoox

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Oh, this is a great description of a living hell...thanks for sharing...this reader feels you should have won because this is so powerful.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

I too, agree with the rest...you should have won with
this powerful piece
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

You captured HE -- with gusto. A powerful write!....M

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

I say a winner here too for you capture Hell well in this small but intense piece.

Blessings & Love,
Josie

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

You win here Karla!
Sounds alot like hell to me.
There isn't many that isn't going to be able to connect.

Great write, and yes you should have won.

Lisa

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Karla,
Powerful, Powerful , Powerful Karla!
This should be read by everyone!

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Wow! What a write...a thought provoking write...this is a write that stirs the very depth of one's being. For the enemy is a liar...his job is to kill, steal, and destroy....many have lost everything by listening to his deceptive lies. Outstanding write...so much said within the lines. Write on dear friend, this was very powerful!
Blessings from Kentucky,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Seems that truth is pass� and that lies are the new and lasting fade.
"Lier, lier, with the pants on fire" if it were so easy...
Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

I earned a first class ticket here:

At least it was first class. I think I'm on my way there in the baggage compartment!

PS You shoulda won.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

dammit to hell...this hits ya right between the eyes! I think it's very real to life in that not one of us can misunderstand its meaning!
Excellent! You win! :)
Hope your holidays were Blessed! Glad to be back!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Karla~

You didn't win?? Hey, whot's wrong with those people?? LOL I agree with Fee wholeheartedly, this is very good! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 10, 2007

Well if you didn't win you certainly should have gotten an honourable mention for this was really good.

Fee