Comes The Sun (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

"All of God's master plan" The dark clouds give us thunder. The thunder gives us rain. The rain gives us a rainbow, and the rainbow gives us th sun. Your poem expresses the concept well.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

whew.....ditto Georg...he said it best!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

Never tought about the skies cussing, but they also get pissed off by bad weather I suppose.
Georg

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on November 19, 2007

So I guess that as far as storms go The Father is the Sun

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Loved this write Karla
also love the sound of thunder
am I normal to make such a statement?
Thunder is not the distroyer
but the bolts of lightning that it's echoes sound
like thunder, are the true distroyers of the accompaning storm
something like that
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Now that, is a great poem! --Charlie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

So true you are and this poem grips the imagination of what the weather can be like.

Fee

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

With the light comes the sun...good one Karla, however I still love a good thunder storm...
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

The contrasts we are subjected to are nothing short of phenomenal! Like their Creator, right?

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Here, Here, the Beatles, said it best "Here Comes, The Sun,...."
LOve the picture and yes it is inevitable the sun always returns, thank goodness!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

One bolt of lightning could power Texas if we only knew how to harness it. When it comes, we will harness the sun.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Bravo, bring it on, Karla! I like your reposte to that hissy fittin fury-meister. When I next say a bad word I can know who to blame! Tis the weather's fault... :)) K xx

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

lovely graphic, enjoyed the read

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Balance is what He wants - night and day, the bad with the good, ups and downs, but the Light always comes through.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

This was amazinmg thank you for sharing it here
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

After every cloud comes the sun-how true!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Ab-so-lutely . . . Actually I life rain, even thunderstorms . . .

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Wonderful writing!!!! I am a reader now so I am still here in that respect but not posting anymore.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

Inspiring write, indeed, Karla! Very well penned; love the comparison to the thunder acting like an ill-tempered person or a bratty child! Neat!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

An inspiring write dear friend, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on November 18, 2007

The sun has the day,
The dark the night,
Give the dark its due,
Its there for me and you...Ed & Rufuz