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November Moon
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The huge full moon inspires ...


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Huge November moon:
an eye staring down,
watching as I write -
all knowing, seeing -
can you see inside?
.
.
.
Have mercy on me ...

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/26)
 


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 Reviews of "November Moon"
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Are you moonstruck Karla, open the window slightly let it hover over your shoulders and play the moonlight sonata, have some one read that beautiful poem next to you, that should give the rigtht atmosphere,have it filmed as your doing it ....Bless you!Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by hazeleyed angel (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
I love this, it is a very good write, short and to the point.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
Ha. Have mercy on all of us! Great title and little piece. Cheers

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
The Moon, like the eye of the Beautiful One
all seeing, all knowing...
For a while, you got me speechless there Karla. Simply beautiful!

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
I always thought the moon was an eye--profile, then gradually full-face. Short and sweet, and Whammming. --Charlie

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
Powerful! A beautiful write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 27, 2007

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
Wow Karla --

The moon is a powerful thing.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed on November 27, 2007
BEAUTIFUL! and All Knowing!
I love what I've been seein' and feelin'
I have a poem comin' on the early morning moon! :)
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
this is lovely-i love the visual as well

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Good little write full of thoughts. Lady J

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
It is a beautiful one this month Karla.
Here's "Moonin" ya.

Walt

Reviewed on November 26, 2007
A beautiful write, keep these coming
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
The Moon sees all, knows all and is all...I loved your poem. The moon is sending you it's magical energy, Karla, just take it in and feel good!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Fantastic metaphor here. You have me thinking about the moon in a whole new light - very difficult to do! Great sense of humor at the end~ lol! -Sheila

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Yes and your beautiful :-)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
A lovely verse on the magic of a full moon...who knows what it sees
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Sounds like you're being hypnotized, Karla.
Whatch out for the spell....
great write!
R~

Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Great pic! Wonderful write short and sweet and meaningful.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
yes, I beleive the man in the moon sees very well,,,
great one Karla
Christine

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
The mystery of the moon is clear for me. It is the light to shine the way for all of us dreamers.
love,
Susan

Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Beautiful write about the Full Moon; indeed, it is a wonderous sight to behold! Your poetry keeps on getting better and better! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Yes, I can the heart of a poet. Email 1 went out.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Oh I saw it, through the flames, while we burned the oak
I saw it, through the limbs hanging Spanish moss
I did...and inside, through the eye...BIG POSSIBILITIES!
This has So much to offer,Karla, ... with so little left out!
Excellente! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Ed's full moon ain't.
The man in the moon is looking down on you.
I saw clouds, I guess you have the moon, can yer hand it back.
I love it when the moon is magnified through the earths atmosphere, i was stunned at it as a kid....

Nice one.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
...and, don't you heard me howling?
Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Yes it was one of the prettiest full moons of the year or so it seemed to me.
Good write Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
Ah hah! The moon knows . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 26, 2007
The Full Moon is an awesome sight to behold, and it does see all - so be very good!


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