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Working Title: Weather Movin' In
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--FICTION--

Hearing Garth Brooks' "The Thunder Rolls" inspired this.


Poem Artwork


His face, a fast moving storm front
overspreading the marriage
vows to love and to cherish.  Clouds
of fury consume all in
its path until nothing remains
but lightning, flashing and roar
of fist-sized hail beating her to
the ground.  Bitch, he says.  Your fault.
Shouldn't have pushed, couldn't leave well
enough alone, could you?  No.
Had to get up in my bidness.
Stop your cryin or I will
give you somethin to cry about.
Where's my dinner?  I'm hungry.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/28)
  

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 Reviews of "Working Title: Weather Movin' In"
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Powerful write, the graphic speaks volumes
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
It's never too late to back out...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
The emotion within this piece is palpable...scary
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
That one is like a Darth Vader without the mask!!!!!!!!
Scary thoughts, scary poem!
Georg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Ok, I got my Garth Brooks songs mixed up. I thought thunder rolls was about a young boy learning about love from an older woman. See? I can be wrong.

Walt

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Toss it out the window and pray for the sun to come out and burn his ass off! LOL!
Damn girl, you got it in ya...I wouldn't want to mess with the StormSpinner! :)
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Storms can be very bitter. Interesting write.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Ftraky graphic. I don't follow Garth Brooks so this is totally strange for me. Is this about a song or about his marriage?
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Karla on the Storm...He looks like Lord Vordamor....

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
I don't know, kinda gives me flashes of "Riders on the Storm," and oldie, but a goodie . . .

Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Karla, your interpretation of storms and life just keeps on getting better and better! Dark, disturbing piece about the horrors of abuse; God help those people who live in that situation every day! Very well penned; brava! The pic fits tne nature of this perfectly!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(


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