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Katrina: Complication
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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... The scars are still evident, two years later ... .

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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... then came Katrina, the plastic surgeon that
peeled the face off of Louisiana.  Was
needing a change, but don't you think this was a
bit ... drastic?  Any beauty there was gone with
one slice of the wind.  Patient survived, barely.
The scars are still evident, two years later ...
she sings jazzy tunes, wanting to invite the
people to come back to the City, so she
can remember what it was to be ... normal.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (11/28)

  

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 Reviews of "Katrina: Complication"
Reviewed on December 2, 2007
VEry nicely written Karla!
A stark evident of battle wounds - never to be forgotten!
but in Jazz and Blues, you can only sing what you KNOW and FEEL!
and that would be evident in her voice I bet!
Thank you for sharing this incredible sad display after 2 yrs! What more they need to endure I can only imagine, I hope will keep changing! MANY PRAYERS in their direction!
Warm hugs and Warrior Lady Sheeeooxoo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Wonderful! A powerful write.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
I can't even begin to imagine how folks are coping after all this time, and so little has moved forward to helping this city return to normal. Hopefully, "normal" will return for these people.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Powerful words, and powerful pic
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
--love the analogy. --Charlie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Some scars take more than a lifetime to heal, some never...powerful piece that only your unique style can capture...well done!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Sadly it will take a lifetime to rebuild if ever...but normal is as close ad it will get!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Katrina didn't do so much emotional damage as the unforgivable arrogance of a GOP busy playing with oil barrels.
Georg

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
well written, Karla ...

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Very touching write Karla. Well done friend.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
The scars are still evident, two years later ...

I think they will be evident for many, many years.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
I wonder.....

Walt

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 29, 2007
Sadly the rebuilding will take years and years before she is all put back together again, yet it will never be the same as it once was....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Karla, this is as powerful as the storm itself. Your write will keep the hope up for everything to come back to... normal!!
Blessings,
R~

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Mother nature has her ways, God help you if she stares you down her path!
Sadly, many suffer in her way, and unfortunately it happened in an area that was already suffering, outside the songs sung from a heartfilled people...if anyone would survive, it WILL be them!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Excellant look back and ahead to the damage done but to the spirit that lived. Well done Karla.

Fee

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
She's never be normal, it is a farce what it going on down there . . .

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
so much has been said about this but your write is so fresh and the comparison to plastic surgury very clearly and distincly put-i love this one

Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Heartbreaking reality of what happened to the Gulf Coast States, particularly Louisiana, during Katrina--and afterwards. To compare the hurricane to a surgeon and New Orleans as a wounded casualty is chilling. Very well penned, Karla; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 28, 2007


It ois frightening when you see how quick beauty can be destroyed. Thank you for sharing Karla.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
I loved New Orleans when I lived there. If I were to visit now I know it would break my heart. I still don't know what happened to some of my former employees. Nature was very cruel then and still can be a terrorist in it's own way. The worst part is not really knowing the outcome until it's too late.
Love,
Susan


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