Tired of the dizzying carnival ride through clouds tossing it to & fro, a lone raindrop seeks the one thing that will ensure its suicide - dryness. At least, the last thought will be a warm one ...
Powerful write, and a painful one we had a friend who I went to school with commit suicide, and he had so much going for him, but he also had a lot of inner turmoil
God Bless
Michelle~
Very happy to know it is not your state of mind. For the artist is truly fragile and yet stronger in depth of love than the world.
Love
Amor
Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
And its essence will survive, molecule by molecule, andf live again through a thousand storms, each one renewing the life of our Earth and its feckless children...
See - your words inspire us - your thoughts are gentle and profound, and we love you.
Glad to hear it's not about you. I'm sure those who've contemplated suicide feel this poem deeply. It expresses overwhelming despair in a most intuitive way.
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A bulls-eye on capturing the simplicity of such a complicated emotion. Excellent.
...Michael
God Bless
Michelle~
Fee
Christine
peace and love, Carole~
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
Feeling that lonely teardrop
washed away
amongst the clouds
finding the essence
within the soul
is still allowed.
STay Positive!
Georg
Glad to know you aren't thinking in this vein; still, all in all, a darn good write! Love that ending; clever! Very well penned; brava! Love the pic!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sis, Karen Lynn. :D
Walt
Love
Amor
See - your words inspire us - your thoughts are gentle and profound, and we love you.
Keith
Good one!
Axilea
I loved it
EXcellent write
Peace be with you
William
God bless you. Kathy
Hugz,
Dee
who lives amid the mist
It's only dying wish is
to come between a kiss.
Love your mind.
Susan
R~