Unloading (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on December 5, 2007

Hi Karla- I've thought of this way too many times!
I have much to get caught up on, and trying to convince myself, A NEW YEAR ahead, and organization!
WE must start someone! GREAT thought poem!
Hope you have much/trunks/etc. to share, I started and did drop off's!

Find Peace in your Heart this Holiday SEason!
Much love and Warm hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on December 5, 2007

Karla - I didn't know you knew my husband? LOL. He's THE pack rat!! When he's out of town, I 'recycle' some of his stuff I'm sure he won't miss..... and he never does!
Great poem, great meaning!
R~

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Another excellent write Karla thanks for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

well put-powerful write with much to think about

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Super.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

material things can come to own you. I let go of these "treasures" long ago and made so many people happy and lightened my load.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

I sure wish I had your imaginaion,, Great Write !
:) Christine

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Yes I agree! Good write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Geee you wrapped this one up neatly!!

Well done Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

A hell of a lot of down-home philosophizing in this little gem . . .

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

I think I need one of those POD things...LOL.
So, So true...well said!!
Dee

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Oh Karla such wise words as I say get rid of the excess baggage for it only weighs us down. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Very timely advise, especially around the holidays...
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

very perfect poem and perfect advice for me at this time (after having moved this year!)You've gotten so pro w poetry-- if you didn't write that and break the lines just right, some might say it was prose.
Best, michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Every attic has a pack that anchors you there...
Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

That is a great attitude if ever there was one! (now practice what you preach;-) JK;-) You sure get a lot of bang out of your pen!Superb!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

You are so right with this.
What a packrat I am.
Walt

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Awesome! This is going in my library too. --Charlie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Wise and true Karla, well penned.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

Throw 'em in the trash! LOL

That's the way to get rid of unwanted baggage! Learn to see the good in life! A lesson we BOTH can use! Very well penned and wisdom-filled poem; enjoyed! Love the graphic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

I agree... ship it off to someone else! ha!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 4, 2007

How very wise!