Before the Sun (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 8, 2008

VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

This is an amazing write, thank you for sharing this
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Waxing philosophical, are we? I like this one. Direct, to the point, pensive mood, and accessible imagery. Good job, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

a strong write which reveals much strength

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Looks like the same sky I see, but better...Ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Yes,, nothing like gazing at the stars,, just you and them,,amazing write karla!!!!!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

To boldly go where no man (or woman) has gone before.....Delightful...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

A beautiful image indeed Karla, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

My favorite to date dear Karla.......I love the compact complexity....the deeper message......

Peace my friend,

Bill :-)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Captain Kirk would be proud of this.
Try the blinking game with them..
Go boldly spec K...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Superb image of past eons in which we may have existed in different forms. Great write Karla!You sure are expanding your poetic skills! Brava!

ET

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

...written of brilliance...
I like this one Karla...
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Well written Karla!!

YOu shine bright lady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

We must all pick our battles. Best to pick one that can be won every day at dawn.
Loved the strength.
--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

"Before the Sun" brings one the smiles of Mother Poet.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

A heavenlt write Imust say Karla
I Loved it, thanks for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Lovely writing JUST WONDEROUS.

Reviewed by Stan Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

You invoke wondrous images of eternity.
See you among the trillion orbs, Stan

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

...and a battle that you will always win if you can hold out until dawn. Beautiful poem, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Beautiful poem, Karla; love the early morning starlight! You never know what you may see when you look UP. Excellent write; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Such a wonderful poem that pays tribute to the stars and the sunrise...lovely

Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Well, Karla, a very intense poem for this early in the morning. I loved the precise moments in this poem..Very beautifully done!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Keep looking, and keep letting us know what you find!

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

There is something hypnotizing about them...
Good morning, Karla!
Becca~

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Outstanding write my friend...I love to ride through the Kentucky mountains at night and star gaze, and other times just sit on my front porch and enjoy the beauty and wonders of what seems to be just within our reach, and what many never take the time to enjoy. I am intrigued by their beauty and often get absorbed and sit for what seems to have been only a short time, when in actuality I sat for hours gazing, wondering, dreaming, imagining, and enjoying...well done my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Too many eyes, best to close ones and hope they will blink out so we can see eternity without distractions.
Georg

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

AWesome thinking gone into this poem. I feel your concentration and thought process.

Love the graphic too.

Love,
Susan