Vulnerable (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

I love the way you have so simply & poetically expressed vulnerability. I feel this way sometimes!
Cryssa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

Metaphorically genius Karla.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on January 11, 2008

Karla, a truly beautiful write. So much said in so few words. Your poetry just gets better and better.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

I love this write, and that image is amazing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

wow--daring!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

OOOOHHHH! Daring write here Karla.
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Great image, Kalra. It underlines your words well.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

The graphic image that you have chosen very effectively serves to complement your message. Thank you, Karla. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Wow this is kinda hot. I like it.
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

totally fantastic pic and poem! You are on a roll Karla!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

NP!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Don't need...I am already under it...
Georg

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

It is, like Karen said, painfully beautiful and vulnerable even in it's speaking of vulnerability. You are gifted. I know what you mean about the blanky being pryed away. It's painful. --Can't resist sometimes, though-- when there's a beauty there that just gleams through the thin fibers. I want to just peel down a corner and take a peek... and sometimes some revealed souls are not as forgiving as you... Love ya! --Charlie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Karla~

I won't ask for you to lower that blanket, but you need to take a good, hard look at yourself and try to figure out what's really going on inside. I am sorry you are feeling bad; you are indeed in my prayers! Please know I love you and care for you; you are a wonderful poet/photographer; don't let the comments of others bring you down. They don't know you like I do; they don't know any better. Just dust yourself off, try to move on. That's what you've told me. Don't be afraid; you write for YOU. Deep pain very well expressed.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

Ah, come on, you know you wanna . . . Sure ya do . . . Gotta love it . . .

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

I surely won't. It is truly up to each of us to decide just how much we wish to reveal to others.