Amateur (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 18, 2008

Boy, do I feel like this1
YOu wrote this eloquently Karen!
Pick that pen UP!
STay Positive!
Different strokes for different folks!
I won't forget it either!The Master is a whom he is!
Write On!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Thought provoking poetry with meaning... I love your poetry. It has a certain softness to it. I like each one better than the last one. :~)
Cryssa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Great offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Don't knock the amateur. We are His brushes, pens, and even the canvas! LOL!

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

...inspired by one Master...we become wise to the beauty of lifes art.
You are wise of beauty Karla...
John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

as are so many of us--but in putting thought to pen and pen to paper we do get better!!!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Aren't we all? I love learning from a Master.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Yep, same page today.

Walt

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Ahhh but if that is the case that would make him the muse and you the vessel of his inspirations so write on...

Fee

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Oh, Karla, this is beautiful! Insignificant is how I feel when I think of all He's done. Yet, He fills me with a yearning to excel. You are a guiding light in my life.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Ah, but the Master works through You, Karla. Don't ever put that pen down, my friend.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

When it comes to the predictability of weather...everybody is an amateur.
Don't sweat it.
Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

But it is BECAUSE of the Master that you write, Karla. Don't throw it all away; enjoy the gift He's given you! So what if you don't get the reviews; I happen to love how you write, and so do many others! Now pick that pen up and keep writing and taking those gorgeous photos! BRAVA, very well penned, Karla~!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Beautiful writing sweet lady,stay safe and well OK...Hugssssss

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

Karla, the picture says it all...you put it in words; well done.

Dan

Reviewed by stan nassano

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

and yet we strive to try to reach that moment of greatness,
great write karla,
stan

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

You write beautifully Karla; right from your heart where he has put the words for you. Well done friend. God has blessed you so.