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Decision
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She spreads untested wings
into the wind.  Will the currents
be friendly, vaulting her to heights
unknown?  Or will they go out from
under, smashing her to the ground?
She will never know unless she tries -

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (3/7)


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 Reviews of "Decision"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
One must always try and hopefully succeed. Wonderfully penned Karla. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 9, 2008
...just another side of angels...
John

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Awesome poem. Reminds me of me - nothing ventured, nothing gained. We'll never know what we can do unless we try.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Ha! I love that, Karla! And that photo is the coolest!
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Faith is an extra set of wings... --Charlie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Spread you wings and taste the wind
it's freedom calling
Beautiful write Karla
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
The first fly of a chick most be terrifying as well as full of ecstasy, but all came after that desision...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
Neither will any of us - Try On!

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 8, 2008
I feel as if this thought-provoking poem was written just for me, complete with fat finches to depict me! Very well written. Rebecca

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Whom do you mean, Karla? So don't want her to fail... ...I worry about her. God. You've got me thinking. Love to you and peace and all that is good,

Ton ami de la C-B, Canada,

Regis xo

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
This makes me think of a favorite Rumi quote:
"Load the ship and set out. No one knows for certain whether the vessel will sink or reach the harbor. Cautious people say, "I'll do nothing until I can be sure". Merchants know better. If you do nothing, you lose. Don't be one of those merchants who won't risk the ocean."

You have said it very nicely.

Axilea

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
lovely--she'll go, I can feel it!

Reviewed on March 7, 2008
A lovely pic that complements a more lovely poem. You soar in this, friend!

Micke

Reviewed on March 7, 2008
What about virtual flight is that ligid, jus teasin again, nice birds, what kind? Actually they look a bit fat, are you feeding them? they might not even get off the ground with all that weight.
Why test new currents of untested waters, when it's this good at home? You gots forty year old teenagers still at home? anyway just curious Karla. Hugs and blessings my friend! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Very nice writing sweet lady...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
She's be flying high if she were here tonight, the wind is picking up . . .

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
so true.. yet sometimes it takes the wind knocking us off our perch to really be willing to try and fly...

Cryssa

Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Wonderfully uplifting write, Karla, and I love the picture of the birds! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
Karla,
Some of the best moments in our lives come because we chose to take a risk. Life is filled with risk and without risk, there would be no rewards. You said it best, "She will never know unless she tries."
A short, yet powerful inspirational poem.

Thanks,
Jill


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