The sun breaks through the
cloudiness, after
the rage of storm. Look -
a rainbow! Isn't
it beautiful! Hope
promises things will
get better ... you know,
friends are like rainbows:
they shine the brightest
when least expected.
I'd make this the 3rd in a series of #10's - you've some style, all are about this same length in which you excell - plus you can add "they" shine after Rain and sometime during Rain! New beginning's the thing!
Rainbows are very close to my heart..and your poem captures the spirit of these wonderful prisms in the sky. Friends are indeed like Rainbows when they surprise you with their understanding and empathy.. when the days are grey, and sometimes when the days are just perfect!...Lovely Poem! Diana.
Karla, a beautiful poem, and I'm so glad to see that your so long poem turned into a hello ;-) We do have great friends in life sometimes only we know who they are. So glad you're here!
Karla- YOU sure got that right!
Rainbows are hope anew!
Beautiful meaningful poem!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
In the middle of a storm-- in three hundred sprinkler heads simultaneously at five o'clock in the morning, in rapids that are about to drown you, through wet eyelashes, on my wall when the sun comes through my streaked window at exactly the right angle...
Friends are this life's greatest asset, Karla. I'm glad you're still able to post your poems here. This one is beautiful and the lines "friends are like rainbows: they shine the brightest when least expected." are so true.
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Cryssa
Few words but so powerful. Great pen. Thanks Karla
Tina
God Bless
Michelle~
good to hear your words Karla...
John
Rainbows are hope anew!
Beautiful meaningful poem!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay Strong!
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis
Fee
Georg
they shine the brightest
when least expected."
And oftimes when most needed!
Love your phrasing, the message, and the pic you've shared with us, Karla! THANKS...
Micke
Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Loved this write Karla
Love & Peace be with you
William
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
God is good all the time; all the time, God is good! He answered our prayers! :)
Keep writing and be happy.
All the best,
Jill
Beautiful words Karla,, Just love it! :)
Christine
Enjoyed.
Doug