Reciprocity (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on October 20, 2009

I know the feeling, when I was working I never had any time off to travel
Now I'm not working and have lots of time, but no money to do much of anything
What can a person do LOL , life is a vicious circle
Enjoyed the write
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on October 15, 2009

Sunshine on my shoulder makes me happy.

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on October 15, 2009

Concise and perfect, Karla. Magnifique.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 15, 2009

You create a real feeling. This is easy to relate to, Karla. Nicely done.
Sheila

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

There is a bit of a musical bent in this fine piece Karla. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

I hope the sun breaks through, soon.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

If I had painted that cloudy sky, they would had told me that "it" would never happen!
Thanks for furnishing the proof that it does happen!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 14, 2009

Love the triology affect you use in this one, sort of a sweet play on me, myself and I for you are the weather lady.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Karla, this is clever and the title perfect!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

So THATS where the rain is coming from this week, huh? Thanks a bunch...LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Very well written and so appropriate for the weather in Sacramento today.Thanks Karla.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

well said!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Love the poem and the pic.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Great write with a great picture too, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Karla,
This mood you capture perfectly, "...the sky, rain and me ---"
so many days I feel like this, it stikes a deep note.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Great words pieced together, Karla / You have mastered the art of getting across what you want to say in the poetry medium . . .

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Very nice, Karla, both in verse and in image! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Hope the sun shines soon for you!~ You are ever in my prayers!~

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

WOW...WHAT A GREAT PHOTOGRAPH! EVERY ONE HAS THEIR DAY, KARLA...HANG IN THEIR, YOURS IS COMING. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Karla,

You've described this all too well. Those clouds are so omininous, it's looks they will attack at any minute!

Mary

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Sure is a cottony sky in the picture and under a sky like that, I suppose I'd want to see the sun, too. Hang in there Karla, that sun has just got to peek through soon.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Karla, I think the Jersey Shore is preparing to
reciprocate with a bit of rain of its own.
Better'n ice. Another fun write. -gene.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Hi Karla, believe it or not, the sun is shining in Connecticut. It was rainy this morning but the sun is now shining...it definitely lifted my mood. I love your poem, it portrays real emotions.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" :)

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Raining here in Jamestown, but we need it, so I am not going to complain to much
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Raining here in LA too. This fits the mood perfectly Karla.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 13, 2009

Indeed!
A chain of events that can go several different ways.
Reciprocity is a big gurl word you know? (-:
Well done!
r