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Deaf
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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i think he's sitting there,
fingers stuffed in ears,
not hearing the prayers
of his people.  how can
he be listening when
there is so much tragedy
in the world?  don't give
me this it's because of
sin --- isn't he supposed
to be the deliverer, to not
give us more than we can
bear?  shoulders bowed
not in worship, but with
the weight of the world ---
teach me to pray because
my words fall on deaf ears.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (4/9)

 


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 Reviews of "Deaf"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 19, 2010
Ah... but He lifts burdens, Karla...reminds us how to smile...all one needs to do is to look at the sunset in the evenings and the sunrise in the mornings...the flowers of spring & summer... feel the cool rain on the face...to know that you are loved by one above. Maybe the tragedy is to draw people to Him, and ultimately to bring them home to Him...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 17, 2010
Well, something's going on. Great way to express your frustration, Karla. Things are not changing for the best; I agree. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 13, 2010
...and the dragon unleashed his mighty tail--
in one fell sweep, he razed a city to the ground
(and the knights were kneeling all around,
praying)

And God in His heaven was quaking the earth with his roar of
"Wake Up!! Stand and fight!"

and there's a time for praying, and a time for slaying-- and a time for doing both at the same time.

End times for sure. --Charlie

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on April 12, 2010
he hears and will answer. powerful voice in this poem, heard over the storm.

Reviewed on April 12, 2010
I think we've all felt this way in the really hard times of our lives when answers seem so far away.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 10, 2010
I am reminded of Job and his suffering. I am also reminded by your poem of the Psalmist David who said, "They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their strength. They shall mount up like wings as eagles. They shall run and not be weary. They shall walk and not faint. Teach me Lord to wait."

Reviewed on April 10, 2010
Powerful write!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 10, 2010
It is God that gives us comfort..peace on earth was never promised, Keep your faith,,without it we would be doomed~
Love
Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 10, 2010
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 10, 2010
I haven't seen yet the straw that can break the camel's back.

Georg


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
I think He is there to help, not to give to us outright what we want...e (if I interpreted this one right?)

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
It's easy to lose faith in a world gone mad. Perhaps the problem lies in man's determination to have his own way come hell or high water. I firmly believe that God is there for those who seek Him but the seeking must be on His terms, not ours. An excellent, powerful write that calls out for answers that don't come easily. Peace to you, my friend. Rebecca

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
I think you are completely "allowed" to express what you feel, Karla. God knows I can completely relate to your questions. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
I thank Peter for his words as God above is not responsible for the going ons. We the people make the choice and we have the will to change them. I know God will not give us more then our shoulders can bear although we may feel weighed down at time, believe me He hears every word and crys along with us Karla. Keep your faith dear and all will work out.

Newfie Hugs & prayers are on the way. Rose

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
God is not a dictator. Mankind has the power of choice. Free will, so to speak. So it's up to us to decide how we conduct our affairs. The world today is upside down. Man has made it this way. In fact, a very small number of men have seen to it that things are the way they are. These are people who have drunk from the poison chalice of absolute power. Man's attempt to become God. They believe science will achieve this. But science will ultimately fail for it does not take into account the spirit of man. And when their science fails them, so will they fail. And the parasite elite will disappear into the black hole of history. And then you'll know that those deaf ears weren't deaf after all.

Reviewed on April 9, 2010
Hello Karla:

I'm not immune to feel others pain and suffering; but I think that some of the man-made disasters we cannot blame God for that. God has given us a nice place to live, but men has destroyed it through wars and science.

I can write of the miracles in my life, and some I have already posted them in my blogs section.

The latest:

1) I have prayed to God for some money to come to us, and a day later, my hubby handed me $1,800.00.

2) I have also prayed for my daughter's leg to get better, and two days later my daughter called me and told me she can now walk without her crutches and even puts on her high heels shoes. (My daughter has hurt her leg a month and a half ago, and the estimated time of healing isn't due yet. But I prayed to God for her healing, and she healed).

Please read those miracles of my life in my blogs section. I have posted it sometimes ago. Here is the links to those miracles:

http://authorsden.com/visit/viewblog.asp?authorid=6807&m=3&y=2010&blogid=48615

I know it sounds unbelievable, but they are ALL TRUE STATEMENTS from me.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
This is not at all like you, Karla. Mankind has made the world into what it is today with its out of control technology. It is totally unlike what God had created for man when He made earth a true paradise. Psalm 46:10 - "Be still, and know that I am God." But no, we weren't then and still aren't wise enough to listen to Him.
If man had listened to God back then, maybe this part of Daniel 2:21 would never have been written - "And He changes the times and the seasons; He removes kings and raises up kings;......"
As for me? I believe in and trust in my Lord completely.

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
I am not much of "A Believer" and with all that happens, with all the horror about us daily...every day! I am more and more of a disbeliever... See my poem directly below your's Karla. Because I do believe that, due to the daily, never ending horror I believe that I've become "Mentally Deficient."
Mark

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 9, 2010
I could not hear a word you wrote -- but I see everything you said --He hears, we do not know how to listen or observe as we should -- peace and love to you my dear friend Karla -- Jon Michael

Reviewed on April 9, 2010
Powerful words here, but one good Christian friend of mine told me its not about giving us more than we can bear, its about him not giving us more than he can bear, keep the faith girl, we are facing a dark and turbullent time, but there is light, and beauty if you look closely enough
In Christs Love
Michelle~


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