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inSANE
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Just when I think it can't get any
Worse, I read the news.  Shouldn't have.  Hear
About someone leaving their dog, their
Child in a hot car.  They died.  Six more
Soldiers killed, one held captive.  Stampede
At a Love Parade?  Nineteen hugged to
Death, hundreds more injured?  Where was the
Love???  Whoops.  Forgot. we're talking about
Man.  THERE IS NO LOVE.  It's been voted
Out, ruled unconstitutional to
Mention Hope, unless it agrees with
The masses, doesn't offend ---- think the
Whole world's insane.  There isn't enough
Calgon made that will take me away ----

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (7/25)


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 Reviews of "inSANE"
Reviewed on August 1, 2010
KARLA - WELL SAID!

Have no idea where that wall is - but - it's a perfect example of what NOT to do at
Mexican Border - my barbed wire idea is cheaper, faster, more practical ...

TK.


Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 31, 2010
The flow of this poem is different for you, Karla, and I like it. Nicely penned. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 29, 2010
News! No, the media does not even bother to cover anything even remotely positive going on in the world today. It does not sell. That is very telling on humanity. Your poem is right on Karla. Joy, peace and love be yours my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
(((((((((( Oh, Karla ))))))))))

Do I ever know how you feel!

Can't watch much of the news. Have to switch to the doggie channel
to keep from getting too depressed to move.

Love ain' dead, but it gets kicked into a corner way too often.

[Wrote something about love being 'outlawed.' Note to self: find it and send it to my sweet and loyal and smart and talented friend, Karla the Stormspinner.]

...and we say we are 'higher' than other animals.

<sigh>

Cheer up, my friend. Because we a r e friends. Because friendship is still possible!!

Love and Peace and Lots of Chocolate (or whatever your fave is),

Burninup N. Carolina
xOxOxOxOxOxOxOxOxOxO


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
this world only looks more insane when we read the liberal media that makes it worse,we need to hold onto the truth of God's words and hope and pray He sees us through it all! It sure can be overwhelming as you say, so well,Karla!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 27, 2010
There is undoubtedly much perversion and tragedy in our sadly warping world, Karla, but then, that's what gets reported cos it sells and fascinates - so just how maladjusted ARE we for that to be the truth of the matter? But, the little-advertised and reported flipside that is goodness, truth, justice, nobility... and all the rest of the loving, out-of-fashion words that could be used to describe such acts, still are happening one-on-one and that is all we can hold on to. As Mother Teresa always said, the ocean is made out of many drops and every droplet counts as/to someone! The world may be barmy, but you and me is good, no?! Well, at least some of the time, anyways... !! :)) Love the way you always tell it like it is, and then some. Let's hope that the more "they" legislate against love and hope, the more they will be displayed in the simple acts person to person that will never be denied. Write on! xx

Reviewed on July 27, 2010
It is a sad picture isn't it Karla? We have to force ourselves to look for the good but we must do it for our own sanity. Well penned.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 26, 2010
Karla, I remember that picture, truly amazing. Your words prick at the heart of all of us. I wish you peace...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 26, 2010
Yes, there is a lot of "sad" in the world, but a lot of times it's where we focus our attention...I, like Fee, prefer to see the glass half full...we're here and we either enjoy the ride and try to change what it is we don't like...or we see the glass as half empty and live our lives in misery. Anyway! You have written this well, Karla and cleverly!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
Death at a love fest is a sign of the times.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
Karla, although sometimes the world seems to have gone to hell in a hand basket...the fact is sadly the bad news always takes precedent over the wonderful things in life...like a new born baby, a grandchild running up and jumping into my arms, two young teenagers who discover love for the first time, a senior citizen who is loved and gives love...flowers in the spring, Christmas trees and puppy dogs. Perhaps I am rambling or maybe I prefer to see the glass half filled but we all have so much to be thnakful for if we take the time to take stock.
fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
So true and, how sad to see so many homeless people in Washington. The American dream. Yes we can? What is happening to America? It's heart breaking. The kindest folk are American, well Texan, lol, more than the other states I worked in. I fear for our cousin over the pond.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
well done

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
An excellent write indeed, Karla. Too true and too sad.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
First, in the picture, the shadow on the wall looks like a tornado. Interesting!

Your poem shows the discontent of many Americans. Is the whole world insane, or is it all centered in Washington D.C.?

Reviewed on July 25, 2010
We read in the Bible that in the last days, the love of many will wax cold. We are seeing that today, sad to say. Powerfully and sadly penned, Karla; very well written! And that piccy looks menacing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed on July 25, 2010
Sad state we live in but there is hope in the Lord
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
This is masterful!! I love this. Your writing delivered with surgical precision. I feel like this many a time. Yes, I read about the stampede in Duisberg. They used to hold the Lovefest in Berlin every summer, then moved it. I guess thousands of people were trying to fit through a tunnel and were trampled to death. Yes, the news is depressing. But isn't it always? One truth I've found for me is that whatever I happen to be thinking about gets bigger. Know what I mean? Excellent piece.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 25, 2010
(By the way, I FINALLY get that picture) and this poem is right on too, where did the love of fellow man and animal go in this old world of ours...e


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