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Damn this Waiting
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My prayers with those along the East Coast as Hurricane Earl approaches the Outer Banks of North Carolina and threatens SE New England.

Image (c) 2010, Karla Dorman


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You can feel it heavy in the air, deep
in the marrow --- something's about
to happen.  You don't need the news
screaming its warnings (wouldn't
help, anyway, now that the power's
out).  The lowering sky is enough to

announce trouble is on its way ----
done all you could.  Boarded up the
windows, stocked up on provisions,
and there's nothing to do but wait
and pray you'll see morning's light
in these hours before landfall ----

 

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (9/2)


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 Reviews of "Damn this Waiting"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
I h a t e hurricanes!! Don't even mention tornados.

When Debi and Tracy were little, I had to stay calm for their
sake. Why did they have to go and grow up? Dog 'n' I race to see who
can squeeze under the bed fast enough!!

Hate to admit how close to true it is. THUNDER scares me, let alone
lightning and 50-mile-an-hour-plus wind. LEAVE ME THE F ALONE!!!

Thanks for the prayers, luv. Musta worked, cause Earl skulked away without doing much damage. l6-ft waves had shore residents scurrying
for cover for a day or so, but other than that, I don't think there was much of a problem. Wouldn't want to live on the coast, would you?

Hope the storms out your way haven't been TOO bad this summer, and that you get through fall without having to flee to high ground. . .or be rescued by helicopter!!!

Thank you for your sweet and loving comments re me po'ms, hon'.
Can't tell you how much they mean.

Y O U do.

Keep the hatches battened & your bumbershoot handy.

Love beyond the beyond,

Phyllis

xoxoxoxox

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 4, 2010
You paint a powerful picture with you words, Karla...well done!
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
nicely done

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Storms are always worrisome. No one likes to hear about people getting hurt or worse. Over here in NH, I'm hearing it's going to rain like the dickens, spoiling one of the local, yearly fairs. But, we'll see. Great sense of humanity in this poem, Karla. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Karla you are in your glory waiting for and writing about the storm.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
good write!

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
A good description of what we've been going through. I feel for my friends in Frisco, NC and on the cape. Am glad its not hitting NH so bad.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Good point and full of faith, hope, and charity. We saw on the news that people were lined up in parking lots at stores to get water, batteries and other essentials. I think I'd have this stuff together in spring, in preparation for the annual monsoons. I'm sure you would as well. Blessings, J

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 3, 2010
Wait, and Pray - seems like so many are now having to do that, these days.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
A powerful write, Karla.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Powerful poem!

Peace. love and blessings,

John Michael

Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Powerful write about the fury of the storm thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Karla, I hope Earl will find a path around us away from Delaware. Large storms pose large threats. Waiting is a game I play not well. I have always been a bit on the impetuous side. May peace love and joy be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Waiting can be hell, especially when you know that hell is what you're waiting for. My prayers are with those who wait. Rebecca

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Jeeze, those guys on the east coast get all the excitement while all we in Southern California get are firestorms and an occasional earthquake.
Very well stated, Karla
Mark

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Don't forget all the other states in its path, VA, MD, DE, NJ, we all have to keep prayers for everyone else...Ed

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
Thanks Karla. We're buttoning up the hatches tomorrow morning.

Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I pray for all those along the East Coast: scary times for them! Powerful write, Karla; can feel the tension in this! Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
I pray for all in the path of Earl as I have family and friends preparing....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 2, 2010
As Tom Petty once said: "the waiting is the hardest part!"


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