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The Time Of Day Before The Sun
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Early morning.  Just waking
up.  Still dark out.  Nothing
moves, except me, inside.

TV off.  The only sound is
the tick tick tick of the clock
and fingers on the keyboard.

Words spill onto the screen
--- better them than my cup
of tea.  Ahhhh.  Just what I

need to take the chill off.  It's
just me and God:  love the
time of day before the sun.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (11/4)


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 Reviews of "The Time Of Day Before The Sun"
Reviewed on December 1, 2010
To make a poem this visual is the sign of a great poet and that you are Karla. You could have been writing about me except that my cup would contain coffee. Lots of cups of coffee. Lots.

Blessings on your day,
Marcia

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Sounds like a relaxing moment. No hustle and bustle. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Beautiful! Love the format, the well chosen words, tight verses.
Good writing from beginning to end.

Axilea

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Beautifully said, Karla.

Reviewed on November 6, 2010
That is why I like the late night, when I can write in quiet! Or think, and pray, beautiful Karla thank you for sharing~ In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
Eyelids. Fail to work before sunrise. Genetic...probably not. Don't care. I'm no Peter but late night prevails. Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
one of my favorites as well-very nice, peaceful like the time of day :)

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Good morning dear Karla,
Sun peeping, cool breze reaching me,bright sky and distant mountains greeting me, your poem reached me with cheers, Happy Diwaali to you, Diwali is our festive day of lights!Tahnk you for your brilliant poem!...ceegeeess.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
The exact way I feel about late night...that is when my thoughts seem to flow easily...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
It is a wonderful time of day and you captured it perfectly. Pour me a hot cup of tea and I'll join you and God, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
I feel the exact same way about late night. Say 11PM to 3, 4AM. Quiet, serene, dark, feel like I own the world. Beautiful Karla.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
This time of day is, indeed, wonderful. Thank you for such a wonderful testimony to His goodness.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
I love this. It sounds very familiar as the words spill onto the screen. :0)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Tea? Karla? Not coffee? <smile> I love those early morning hours too, however, I find I have to go back to bed as soon as the sun comes up.
Amor

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
I love it, too, Karla! Beautiful write; well done! Love the pic~!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Karla, a time when our souls commune with nature and God. That is as good as it gets and we must savor the moments. Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Karla, wonderful reflection...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
So there IS time before the sun rises, huh? I will NEVER see it...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Hah! I'm one of those up before sunrise varmints also, Karla. In fact I usually walk my mutt in the darkness. So you are not alone.

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Karla,

What a 'feel' good poem. Morning is the best time of day.

Mary

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
"The time of day, before the sun." A perfect time to catch up..... ON MY SLEEP!!!! My clock doesn't have any AM's before 7:00 AM Emjoyable little tickle of my imagination though. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Karla, early morning.....the best part of the day! Beautiful writing.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
I, too, love 'The Time of Day, Before The Sun.'


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