Whiteout (poem) by RaeLynn Teller on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 1, 2008

I do relate to this whiteout storm. Not liking storms, I hide wherever I can when seeing or hearing one. Can't sleep if in the middle of night. We have had doozies this summer already. Sometimes thinkng you won't live through them, they really shake me up lately. Thanks for the sharing times.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 19, 2008

You have found your own unique way of portraying the storm with your verses and you have shared very well, RaeLynn. Thank you! Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Natasha Bowman

Reviewed on February 15, 2008

This is absolutley amazing.
You've inserted such vivid mental pictures into my brain cells, its insane.

Wonderful. :)

Reviewed by Erin Woods

Reviewed on February 9, 2008

Beautiful write RaeLynn...much enjoyed !

erin

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Depth indeed! I'm glad I 'found' you RaeLynn. This is beautiful work!
Becca~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

As deep as a snow drift RaeLynn, beautifully penned and thought provoking.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

most enjoyable write Raelynn
I miss the snow
That was exactly why I left the Northeast
Escaping the sins of snow shoveling,
blizzars and slipping on Ice, Now I am sad
to say that I suffer as I swing on my hammock
Sipping Ice tea.
and thinking horrible thoughts
Of what it used to be.
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 30, 2008

Every time I think of snow the image of a shovel comes to mind, I guess I am not a romantic or one fearing retribution...

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Rae this is bold and strong, with great stark images of power unfolding with each line. This is definately thinking and putting your muses words to life outside the box. Bravo bravo

Fee

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Wow! We only got a dusting and some icy roads. I like the double-meaning of this poem - "... as the cleansing begins." I always feel that rain and snow are good ways to cleane the earth's atmosphere and they help me invigorate my spirt, too.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

I'm hoping it stays away from the North East.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Well thank you Raelynn and I wonder what greets you today as I am haunted by your words. A great write for sure as I am taken by each line. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face XOXO, Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 29, 2008

Oh, my, intense! While you're having whiteout, we're having dusty blow in - sky is orange, winds are screaming - 35 sustained, gusting 55 ... scary ... walls of my apartment are shaking!! Stay safe, RaeLynn, 'k? Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.