The ponies of Native Americans of old Symbols of power and strength untold Antiquated in this modern day Still your very being found a way
Your father was so very proud His steel pony set him above the crowd A motorcycle of brilliant blue And to his forefathers he would be true
Though death took him when you were young His devotion to steel ponies still lived on A passion passed from the heavens above Maybe your genes themselves carried the love
Your steel pony set you free From California to New York City A young man trying to find himself Or maybe just your history, itself
With brothers of the road you bonded And friendships for life were spawned With Jeff and Ross you did band And to this day your friends still stand
It was no surprise as your own sons grew The fires of old flamed anew For the oldest, the ponies would be an obsession And even for the younger, the road did beckon
You wondered what legacy you would leave What part of you they would receive Your very heritage envelops their souls And steel ponies have made them whole
On this final journey to your resting place Your sons and friends set the pace Your own purple pony leads the way And, no surprise, your grandson straddles it today
As the thunder rolls, we think of you Both hooves and engines roaring through An endowment from generations past And so on steel ponies the die is cast
One does get addicted to those steel ponies but they are as dangerous as hell. Lost my grandson when a semi didn't see him and now he's long dead. One mistake is all it takes.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2007
Great tribute. I used to see so many of these powerful steel ponies, as you call them but not so much lately. Times change I suppose. Victor
This is a very moving tribute, RaeLynn. As I read this poem, I could feel the obvious affection you still have for Louis. By sharing this tribute, you'll allowed us to appreciate his life, as well.
Wow this is so beautiful Raelynn, I'm sure this tribute to such a fine man and love of your life is heard through the clouds, Thank you so much for sharing with us.
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Wow! Those around you have set such a pace. This wonderful piece is so full of emotional expression and all the wonders of love. Such a touching embrace through time.....
I can think of no finer tribute to this man who you so obviously thought so much of. Yes the steel pony lives for a lot of us as the freedom of the road. Nice work here Raelyn...love it.
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Beautiful work.
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