From someplace on this earth so very far She makes me wish upon a star Not the stars that I do see Lattitudes dictate what can not be She makes me wonder of things Her face I see but can not touch To me she means so very much On common ground we stand side to side Our spirits before have intertwined That same pain we both do feel How can it be if time's not real Our paths have crossed for just a while And I just know she makes me smile To give some respite from my pain Is worth more to me than shiny gold If only I could, I would her hold Other men's heart's I can not know But oh the reality bothers me so I can never hold a grudge I only wish to give a nudge
So warm and passionate! Oh how wonderful it is to wish upon a star. Aging beyond youth is no barrier to the passionate longings of mankind in his quest for love.
I love the very thought of wishing on a star. I would take a lot of things I have said and done back and not hurt the ones I love. No more baggage I would carry from hurts I have felt. This was beautifully penned Walt, and I keep wishing upon a star.
Love the write,
Ann
Your hearts desire is very palpable in this wonderful poignant poem!
Keep hope a friend...
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2007
If our wishes were pennies we'd all be richer in so many ways. this was really a wonderful write for it holds truth I think we all have known and wished for. It's a keeper. Lady J
Love can hurt so badly
The pain is unbearable
The tears unstopable
The out cry understandable
Listen to what I have to say
Give her all the nudges you can
SOmeday you will see
The stars you wished upon
Are much closer than you think!!
She is one very lucky lady
If a man had written ME a poem like this..I will not only give him a nudge....back....lol!!
Oh Cutie Pie! You are so beautiful and so very sweet. Reach out to her, I am sure she is jest waitin fur yore touch! Don't be bound by past pain, you so deserve to be loved! HUGS! SC
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And of all the star constellations to wish upon too, by GUM :)
Koala hugs to yah
Ch'erie
Love the write,
Ann
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Keep hope a friend...
Love,
Eileen
Love can hurt so badly
The pain is unbearable
The tears unstopable
The out cry understandable
Listen to what I have to say
Give her all the nudges you can
SOmeday you will see
The stars you wished upon
Are much closer than you think!!
She is one very lucky lady
If a man had written ME a poem like this..I will not only give him a nudge....back....lol!!
Most beautiful tribute to your STAR woman Walt!!
Love Tinka
Regis
Stunning. An inner pain, yet strength: excellent.
There will be many stars to wish on this upcoming weekend: the Perseids are in town. Look to the Northeast. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
And I just know she makes me smile
To give some respite from my pain
Is worth more to me than shiny gold
Then Smile On, and write more of these marvelous golden poems, my friend.
I can never hold a grudge
I only wish to give a nudge
These last two lines say it all. This is a masterpiece dear Walt
Be safe,
Karen
Tavia.
Fee