Pensive she sits by the stream,
Thinking of nothing, really.
Her lovely hand lets the water trail over it as she sits,
Wondering of nothing really.
The absolute beauty of nature fills her mind,
Dreaming of nothing really.
Feeling the coolness of the water,
And it's gentle pressure on her hand.
Wishing for nothing really.
Just the rustling of leaves stirred by the wind does she hear,
Hoping only that this peace in her mind will last,
Thinking of nothing, really.
I can completely relate to what "she" is letting happen around her; probably inhaling the serenity and hopefully allowing it to wash away hurt and negativity. Nicely done, Walt. Love and peace to you,
i'm luv'n traveling thru your writes...so glad i stumbled onto your work...'of the sea' stuck its big foot out and here i am...i'm mesmerized...i bow to your talent.
can't wait to get back and re-read 'being swept out to sea'. we had a similar experience...still too traumatized to write about...only notes...we were foolishly (as novices) going in at night (inter coastal)...off coarse in st. andrews sound...ran a ground swept into the breakers...tow ran aground coming for us...battered bruised for 7 nightmarish continuous slamming black hours. needless to say we're taking sailing safety lessons etc...was a great learning experience of what NOT to do and what TO do and have aboard...will have to say i was glad to get home to my horses... we're marinaed in brunswick ga at hidden harbor marina....so glad to bump into your work...we're also vietnamers...pmedlin
Walt,
There's so little peace of mind in the world anymore...if we can have it for an instant its not forgotten. I love this poem of contentment and peace.
Absolutly breathtaking silence!
I feel the moment you created!
Thank YOU!
A favorite of mine! A gem I will treasure!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
You sure know how to set a mood. I love moments like that when you don't have to think/dream/wonder/wish/hope for anything. You just ARE. And that's enough to bring the peace.
Leo
Love this one. Your poem gives me an image of a beautiful young maiden sitting by the stream--and I added to the image--barefooted, long flowing hair, a diaphous skirt blowing in the breeze--her delicate hand sifting water from a clear blue stream.
Nice vivid images and this reader wanting to see the beauty of nature that fills her mind, but you've painted a beautiful picture for the reader to see. I enjoyed this.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Thank you for sharing your heart,
~Linda
Love ya!
Jane
Regis
can't wait to get back and re-read 'being swept out to sea'. we had a similar experience...still too traumatized to write about...only notes...we were foolishly (as novices) going in at night (inter coastal)...off coarse in st. andrews sound...ran a ground swept into the breakers...tow ran aground coming for us...battered bruised for 7 nightmarish continuous slamming black hours. needless to say we're taking sailing safety lessons etc...was a great learning experience of what NOT to do and what TO do and have aboard...will have to say i was glad to get home to my horses... we're marinaed in brunswick ga at hidden harbor marina....so glad to bump into your work...we're also vietnamers...pmedlin
Blessings..
Vesna :)
Anna
There's so little peace of mind in the world anymore...if we can have it for an instant its not forgotten. I love this poem of contentment and peace.
Blessings+
~Linda
A lovely, engaging piece bursting with freedom and peace of mind!
Love and Joy, Suzie :-D
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Edwin
God bless you. Kathy
I feel the moment you created!
Thank YOU!
A favorite of mine! A gem I will treasure!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
LOL...I wouldnt mind sittn right there once again.
I could of sworn there for a minute you were describing MOI
:( Ch'erie
Love,
Eileen
The imagery is so real I have to shake my head to make sure i am not "THERE" right next to this stream!!
One of your most delicate and most defined pieces!!
Love Tinka
Loved your words and the imagery..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
Love,
Susan
Larry
Dee
Christine
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Fee
Leo
Thanks,
Dan
This is beautifully penned serenity. Well done.
((HUGS))) and love, Karla.