A collaboration with beautiful Tinka

Within the castle of our dreams
The debris of the past still floats
The walls of insecurity needs to be washed
To eliminate all that trash from within
We need to re-arrange some furniture
And decorate those dark thoughts
Within the castle of our dreams
Old memories need to fade away
To allow new ones to elate each day
Within this castle of OUR dreams
Only words of love to be spoken
Like an avalanche to flow
Beneath the warmest sunrays of love
Slipping from the chambers of our hearts
Warm and tender…deep

A falling refrain
Two hearts together in harmony
Words of love that will be spoken
With meanings real and not just token
No more pettiness or something phony
This will be our testimony
Past derbis have left our side
Like flotsam on the ocean wide
Our dreams one day will all come true
Because of me, because of YOU
Within the walls of our castle keep
Eternal love runs so very ....deep

Copyright © 2007 Tinka Boukes and Walt Hardester



David Young

So much flowing emotion of a writer's pure talent.



Morning Star

Exquisite write and so moving as i read between
The lines it sounds like a love that is beginning to flower
Excellent collaboration
Your building a beautiful Castle Of Dreams
That could be a realistic!!
Love Peace and many hugssss...Morning Star



Georg Mateos

A literary flower and a literary bee giving us the honey of a poem.
Thank you both.
Georg



Leland Waldrip

Catharsis! Beautifully done, Tink.
Love and {{{hugs}}}},
Leland



Mr. Ed

This was very good on Walt's page; even better with this music, Tinky!



Paul Berube

Tinka/Walt

Outstanding piece of poetry. Cleaning out the cobwebs of the past and

making room for tomorrow.



Walt Hardester

Tinka, thank you for allowing me to add to your wonderful work, and yes,

We did do good. Even if I must say so, our collab shines like the stars.

Makes me proud of US both.
Love,

Walt



Rose Rideout

Tinka I just told Walt that you and him do beautiful work together ,

I loved every word in every line. Thank you both for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose



Andy Turner

Has a fairytail feel



Carin Spirit

This is Beautiful. Thank you, I needed this.



Karen Palumbo

Beautiful, just so esquisite! So moving as you stream from one

verse to the next bringing it all together in a woven fabric of love....

Be safe,
Karen



Joyce Bowling

Stunning my friends...a great collaboration and the choice of music

is excellent...bravo to a fine duet!
Blessings,
Joyce B.



E T Waldron

I read it on Walts site,you two have truly done a magnificent poem that puts

love in the higher realms where it belongs!

Love,
Eileen



Felix Perry

Like two stars riding paralell orbits you two always come together to

create a super nova of a poem...well done,

Fee



Susan de Vegter

Wonderful friendship that benefits us all because it brings with it

twice as much talent. Hooray!
Love,
Susan



ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Great write from two of my favorite co-conspirators for the TRUTH
that sets you free indeed! Beautifully written. Rock



Kathy Armijo

Is this poetry or love in bloom?

I'm hoping it's love cause I do like a nice romantic ending/beginning.

Kathy



Southern Comfort



So very beautiful and blissfully romantic! Truly SIGH WORTHY! LOVE YA'LL SC



Ted Bossis

Wonder-filled indeed within these walls -love * TedSo



Karen Vidra , The Texas Tornado

Wonderful write, Tinka and Walt; you two make quite a team!

Very well done; brava! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :

( (Feelin' sad today)



Holly Hamilton

Dear Tinka, why haven't you got another book of poetry out?

This is so uplifting and so bloody good. I already commented on Walt's site,

and think you two have done a marvelous job! Love Holly



Karla Dorman The StormSpinner



Read this under Walt's name, Tinka, what a write! Beautifully penned,

I need this happy place today. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

You two make beautiful poetry together